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Slow dancing...
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Slow dancing... |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia 
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I could dance with you a life time Under the sparkle of stars Around a moonlit lake beneath a rainbow or two And into a crowded room All you have to do is ask For the dance to begin Just one slow dance with you Would be a dream come true Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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GBride Senior Member
since 2009-07-02
Posts 538 |
A very nice dreamly like write. So relaxing on this Sunday morning. |
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Yoinn Senior Member
since 2007-08-16
Posts 649Michigan |
I love slow dancing.. You captured it very well here in this poem. Yoin Larry Silverstein bought the Twin Towers 5 mths before 911 bombing. He already owned bld 11. He took out "terrorist" ins on them. He won 500 million. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
With a lovely invitation like that from the Radiant One, your dance card will be filled in no time flat!  Swaying to the music! A one, and a two, and a one-two-three... Linda   |
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XGarapanX Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435Antarctica |
Ok. But I have two left feet. ·´~`·»Brett«·´~`· |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Roniece Dawson-Bruce - I extend my hand to one fair, for a slow dance with you... BC |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Very pretty! With this, you're going entice us all to dance! misce' |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
Just one is enough isn't it to last a lifetime |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Dear Roniece, you might think twice when you have ten sore toes from me standing on them lol. Not much of a dancer you know, mostly on the inside. Lovely words you share today my friend, enjoyed. Rick |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo dear RDB, What a lovely idea. This is very well expressed. Love Bobby |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Lovely words, Roniece, Ida |
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Oklahoma Rose Senior Member
since 2008-02-28
Posts 1586Oklahoma USA |
Beautiful Roniece! I have had this feeling a time or two. |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
I bet they line up to dance with you because you are the magic woman! Love you, RDB. A-g |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
VERY nice! applause!! |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
Dear Roniece, if I wasn't in a wheel chair I would love to take that dance with you. much enjoyed. love to you dear Lady. Lindsay |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Ah, dear Roniece! When you told me you wereg oing to write a poem to me I had no idea it would be so romantic. Thank you!  (ok, so you didn't but that's my story and I'm sticking to it!)  |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Hello Roniece, this is a wonderful metaphor of love..Thanks for the ravishing dance of words. yann |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
 thank you everyone for your warm and generous comments.. you do smile me! Balladeer.... of course I wrote it about you! .... just don't tell the other guy ok!! LOL! RDB xxBe kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
had to make the time to sway, to and fro for you always find my rythym ... thank you for the sweet dance! : ) |
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Heart2Heart Senior Member
since 2009-05-15
Posts 738Scotland/Norway |
Oh I love a slow dance, and this gorgeous poem puts me in the mood to do so, even on a Monday night And why ever not ? (Carpe diem). Pleased to make your acquaintance Roniece (what a lovely name!). Heart2Heart |
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peaceseaker Member
since 2009-07-29
Posts 161 |
Roniece-I do love this name also..a beautiful name, just as this poem is a gem....lovely write..glad it was brought to the fore again....peaceseaker |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Yummm...James |
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