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Eh? ( Revised from Etheree Challenge)
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Eh? ( Revised from Etheree Challenge) |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
/pip/Forum22/HTML/001001.html Eh? Were you There with me In my presence, I, unknowingly, of your distant essence? Tribulations where exceed my ability to cross fence; While distressed by the future’s dress code, Is it through you, my implosions let vent? Are you the one who sifts smoke from heart’s sky, Buckets the water,wagons the load, Moving clouds for sun to commence? Do you move about freely in drive to dispense with my tears discreetly, granting presents? Unknowing, I’ve been. Yes? [This message has been edited by miscellanea (08-10-2009 10:12 AM).] |
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martiniat8 Senior Member
since 2003-06-21
Posts 897Prague, Bohemia, Czech Republic |
whether you study writing or not, you have a gift |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
martinia, Thanks for your generous comment! I fess up. This one I did try to do by form, then switched it out to become my own form! I'm a non-traditionalist by nature, I suppose. It was a real challenge for me and took me hours! (Yesterday was the first time I've tried anything offered in the Poetry Workshop, finding I really enjoyed it ) |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
It's difficult enough to do the first part ~ but to do the second half is even more arduous! Congrats! Ya done did good, girlfriend!  Stretching one's poetic wings and trying out new formats can be an enjoyable experience ~ and some times NOT! lol Love to you! Linda Lou  |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
The hardest part for me is vocabulary! I just don't have an adequate understanding and recall of words! Blah! See what I mean? Then, to fill in the blanks between rhyming words? It's like doing a literary Suduko! Yes, the task was arduous for me, but the outcome surprised me. I like it. You are so supportive, EA. You don't know how I appreciate those fluttering wings of yours that bring you here! hugs, miscellanea |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Very well written indeed ! A gift is truly evident.  ARCTIC WIND |
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XGarapanX Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435Antarctica |
Oh My Gumbo! Is that a valid phrase? Oh My Gumbo! ·´~`·»Brett«·´~`· |
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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere |
misce love how you spun this form! shellie . flesh, blood, bone, love...twisted |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
beautiful with magical images, you have your own style...thanks for the enjoyment. yann |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Ya done good, misce, and it's a pleasure having you in the workshop...you have talent and you're willing to learn - a combination for success! This one is a keeper |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Arctic Wind, You are far too kind in your flattery. I'm embarrassed now... Ah shucks, Arctic, feel free to embarrass me any time. Thanks for sending your breeze my way. ~misce |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Garapan, First of all, I love your User Name! Next... "Oh My Gumbo! Is that a valid phrase? Oh My Gumbo!" If it isn't it should be cause it makes a person feel all warm inside, while simultaneous wetting an appetite for Gumbo! Yum! Thanks, Garapan, for your exuberant response! Yum! misce' |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
brneyedgrly, I'm glad you like how it spun out. I appreciate your response, brneyedgrly. Have yourself a great day and one heck of a good week! misce' |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
yann, What a very thoughtful comment. Thank you! I'm looking forward to reading your poetry and checking out your style as well! misce' |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Balladeer, First of all, turn your back while I turn red! I'm most flattered that you would find one of my poems worthwhile to keep. Thank you for that and your favorable response, Teach. I really appreciate how you've helped me by your poetic models and inspiration. Your a great and versatile poet Thanks again, misce' |
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