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norunnin
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since 2008-10-16
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0 posted 2009-07-25 10:39 PM


Topic: friendship
metaphor: sunken ship
lacking only an intelligent quip
Therefore, boldly, i quit.

Henceforth, hold me, i quip
when was the last time
i must remember it

Trust or bust, it is written
Bust im already smitten
Love-lust or blood-lust
without trust are one in the same
i repeat forever and ever the name of the same game
so be ashamed you players
but know i am perpetrator not hater
but know everyone is a traitor
ipso facto without haters or players or traitors or perpetrators
nothing is powerful
Nothing is marvelous
and she towers over all of us
threatening to topple us
trust or bust
  

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Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light
1 posted 2009-07-25 10:47 PM


"Trust or bust, it is written
Bust im already smitten
Love-lust or blood-lust
without trust are one in the same"

~ Trust or your ship will rust!

May love-lust win over blood-lust!


EA

norunnin
Member
since 2008-10-16
Posts 71

2 posted 2009-07-25 10:54 PM


Oh she can, i've seen it win more than once.
But oh God and oh man i dont wanna be the last man duking it out with Pan with no one to hold my hand. Ya know?

martiniat8
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since 2003-06-21
Posts 897
Prague, Bohemia, Czech Republic
3 posted 2009-07-26 04:06 AM


wow, well said. Especially like how you began.
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