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Open Poetry #45

Commitment

Huan Yi
Member Ascendant

since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

0 posted 2009-07-25 06:55 PM

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Good God
After all girl . . .
We met in a bar

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[This message has been edited by Huan Yi (07-25-2009 07:28 PM).]

Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

1 posted 2009-07-25 07:20 PM

Yo John,

Yes, and?

Bobby

Yoinn
Senior Member

since 2007-08-16

Posts 649
Michigan

2 posted 2009-07-26 12:08 PM

You know John I kinda like this.
I have a few poems like this, where the title is what carries the thought. The rest of the poem won't work without thinking of the title. As my grandaughter would say

SWEET

Yoin

Just reworked my old poetry page. Check it out before geocities takes it down. Yoin

brneyedgrly
Senior Member

since 2009-06-08

Posts 1125
nowhere and everywhere

3 posted 2009-07-26 01:57 AM

~chuckling

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

4 posted 2009-07-26 03:51 AM

nicely done, enjoyed it.

yann

martiniat8
Senior Member

since 2003-06-21

Posts 897
Prague, Bohemia, Czech Republic

5 posted 2009-07-26 04:02 AM

lmao

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