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thoughtfulthinker
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since 2009-07-22
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0 posted 2009-07-26 12:56 PM



Always the ugly one
never pretty enough
always being told i'm fat
can get kind of tough

I know that he loves me
but sometimes its just hard
Maybe its the distance
Him being away so far

Love's not based on looks
so I don't know why I feel like this
loves about feelings, and emotions.
and I am the only girl he'd miss.

Maybe I just wish...
that some day I could be
Wonderful, and amazing
the most beautiful girl he's seen.

Starving seems to tough
but exercise could work
better food, seems gross.
maybe if men weren't such jerks

Maybe more revealing clothes
or if I was skinny, and cute
maybe then he'd notice me
and I wouldn't make him want to puke

Inner beauty, I have none
no beauty what so ever.
so I hide behind this fake smile
until I can look better


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norunnin
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since 2008-10-16
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1 posted 2009-07-26 01:12 AM


you wont be good enough until you believe you are. beauty comes from the inside. the more you try to hide the real you the more you are less likely to find the one who will truly complete your body soul mind.
Ps if he cant get past your looks then he isnt worth the price of dinner. find out who you are first then you will find the man who will love you for better or more importantly worse

2islander2
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since 2008-03-12
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by the sea
2 posted 2009-07-26 04:01 AM


enjoyed the poem (nicely ewpressed) and appreciated the comment.

keep on the good work.

yann

thoughtfulthinker
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since 2009-07-22
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3 posted 2009-07-26 04:13 AM


Thanks
martiniat8
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since 2003-06-21
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Prague, Bohemia, Czech Republic
4 posted 2009-07-26 04:22 AM


I agree with norunnin, Self Confidence is what's sexy. Fo whatever you need to do to get that self confidence back
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