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Huan Yi
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since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688
Waukegan

0 posted 2009-07-23 03:52 PM


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Stand easy troop
Glad to see you back

Not much has changed
Since you were gone

Pretty much the way
It’s always been
Sometimes we win
Sometimes we lose

Your gear
Is waiting for you
With your friends
In a little while
We’ll be going
Back down again
But by your eyes
It seems to me
Despite your history
You’re still
Just a bit confused

So let’s take a break
With a cup of wine
Watch the light
As it begins to change

And I tell you
What’s goin’ on


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© Copyright 2009 John Pawlik - All Rights Reserved
brneyedgrly
Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125
nowhere and everywhere
1 posted 2009-07-23 05:27 PM



john

i don't doubt that you know

what's goin' on



shel

my mind won't rest and I don't sleep...
not even in my dreams ~ s. nicks

martiniat8
Senior Member
since 2003-06-21
Posts 897
Prague, Bohemia, Czech Republic
2 posted 2009-07-23 05:32 PM


thanks for sharing this, great read. It moved me
2islander2
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since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825
by the sea
3 posted 2009-07-24 05:24 AM


so philosophical and the fair tone..

Pretty much the way
It’s always been
Sometimes we win
Sometimes we lose

Enjoyed very much.

yann

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