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Elizabeth Santos
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0 posted 2009-07-22 11:49 AM



Did you say Emily was here
And had to quick depart
Without a verse to sooth my ear
Nor thoughts to hold my heart?

What bearing was her foot upon?
Which trail did she pursue?
For certain she went thicket deep
On paths nobody knew

For wasn’t she the one whose
Introspection filled her eye
With feathers spread to launch her
Freedom wings into the sky

Beware, dear poet, lest you step
Into another age
Think not that you can trail through thicket
To her poet page

Her verse was spawned in deeper wells
Than those from which you drink
And her simplicity most times
Was deeper than you think

Her poet pen was delicate
Her heart was paper thin
And solitude, the only friend
Who met her deep within

She wove the human element
With fragile threads of breath
But could not do within her life
What she has done in death

Elizabeth Santos

© Copyright 2009 Elizabeth Santos - All Rights Reserved
nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
1 posted 2009-07-22 12:06 PM


Lovely writing and tribute to a fine poet, Liz

I always love to read you aloud as  your thoughts are so smooth to the ear.
M

Chalmette Guy
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since 2009-03-11
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Louisiana
2 posted 2009-07-22 12:08 PM


Emily Dickinson?

I am a fan, and I agree to all this about her.

Elizabeth Santos
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Pennsylvania
3 posted 2009-07-22 12:52 PM


Thank you, dear poets
Yes, it is Emily Dickenson, one of my two favorite poets

Marchmadness
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4 posted 2009-07-22 01:28 PM


What a wonderful, insightful tribute to Emily Dickenson. One of my favotites. I'm sure she would love it.
                                Ida

Oklahoma Rose
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since 2008-02-28
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5 posted 2009-07-22 10:49 PM


Liz, I have a book by Emily Dickenson. She is a wonderful writer. You are one of my favorite poets, my friend. I love really enjoy reading your poetry.
Klassy Lassy
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6 posted 2009-07-23 12:50 PM


Lovely poem to commemorate Emily. It caught at my heart with a sense of sadness.  She is one whose works I've still much to explore, and I'm convinced I should explore yours more, as well.  

Aren't we fortunate that we can tell each other now how much we enjoy their thoughts and insights, while they are still here to know they touched deeply.  And you do.

~Karen

brneyedgrly
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7 posted 2009-07-23 12:54 PM



emily was the first poetry I ever read...

I still go back to her words every so often

your writing is beautiful, elizabeth

who is your other favorite?

shellie


Elizabeth Santos
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Pennsylvania
8 posted 2009-07-23 01:16 PM


The other is Robert Frost

Oklahoma, I love you

Liz

Oklahoma Rose
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Oklahoma USA
9 posted 2009-07-23 09:55 PM


I have a book by Robert Frost, too. He and Emily are great poets. I love you too, Liz.
Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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Eternity
10 posted 2009-07-24 06:17 AM


Oh, you did a great job here, dear Elizabeth. Emily is the Poetess, to whom we can only bow our heads, indeed.

Wonderful.

Love,
Margherita

Nan
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11 posted 2009-07-24 09:26 AM


It's soooo  nice to see you writing so much..

Nan's Morsels Writers' Blog

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