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beyond the steps of time. |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Beyond the steps of Time I walk with touchy friends, I remember feelings of past in the countries of love. Beyond the steps of Time I need to love again, to forget unspoken disappointments lying promises and empty words. I face the heartrending moon the dearest tears of Universe and the certainty of the unknown. I will I hope I will linger in graceful arms, to know that I can love something I can't write, beyond the steps of time. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: When you speak of love, dear Yann, the Universe sings through your words. So beautiful and touching! You will, most certainly, you will love and be loved again. Love, Margherita  |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
This is very touching, yann. I hope you find what you are lookig for. Ida |
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D.Lester Young Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1219Austin, Tx |
Your steps of time dance within the spirit of your words writing into the horizon of eternity. |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
My prayers and wishes for you, Yann, are that you find somebody worthy of your good self, and compatible with you in every way, and that she brings you happiness you never could dream of - and that all this starts way before the steps of time. Owl |
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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere |
~islander i am becoming a fan of your wisdom and really liking your poetry... I will I hope I will linger in graceful arms, to know that I can love something I can't write, beyond the steps of time. i especially liked this ~shellie |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
thank you all for the generous and kind comment, I really don't know how it sounds in english to write: Beyond the steps of time, I found it pretty nice while writing a comment and kept on the work... hugs yann |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
You wrote it well my friend and I hope you Have better luck in the future, I wish you well Yann. Lindsay |
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martiniat8 Senior Member
since 2003-06-21
Posts 897Prague, Bohemia, Czech Republic |
Amen! |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
thanks Lindsay for the kind and constructive comment. yann |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Amen Martinia8. |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"Beyond the steps of Time I walk with touchy friends, I remember feelings of past in the countries of love." it's just so, so cool I enjoyed this very much  |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Thank you very much SEA for the kind and so cool comment...great. yann |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
2islander2 - love is there, and it will find you when you least expect it... BC |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
yann, You have shown yourself to be such a special person here on these pages of PiP. I hope that you receive all you long for in life. Hugs to you, Alison |
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