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Open Poetry #45

Bring On The Heat

A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

0 posted 2009-06-20 07:33 AM

Sweat dripping, clothes sticking,
my body wet all over head to toe,
on a cold ice cube I am licking,
open the window and let it blow,

aching for that cold shower,
heat is rising over one-hundred-three,
getting more hot by the hour,
my hair becomes drenched completely,

salty sweat runs across my lips,
down the center of my back,
from the glass I take a few sips,
I notice the leak and the crack,

Scents of vanilla begin to arise,
from body lotion applied,
Misty shower in not a compromise,
out of it I step, towel dried,

laying naturally upon my bed of silk,
fans blowing wind all over,
cooling sensations like cold milk,
as I await my lover,

bring it on, bring on the heat,
turn it up one-hundred degrees,
a slow burn, tingling feet,
nature is such a tease,

maybe I'll stand in front of the air conditioner?

Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

1 posted 2009-06-20 08:50 AM

Yo dear A Romantic Heart,

This reminds me of summer in the American South before air conditioning.

The poem is very hot.

Love Bobby

Anniepimm
Senior Member

since 2008-12-26

Posts 550
England

2 posted 2009-06-20 10:12 AM

Excellent poem enjoyed it immensely

Very well penned..

Suncleaver
Member

since 2009-01-18

Posts 481
Stafford England

3 posted 2009-06-22 06:59 AM

You've definitely turned up the heat for me.

I love you.

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