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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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she was a mistress of some eastern horizon that damp eyed whisperer always illusive just at the tip of the tongue nameless but she would laugh at the metal sounds that old bones in leather made at dawn when the ink of generations was tauten tempted to be but a sail catching dreams with the sieve of momentary holding fingers at widest gap like the wishbone man's straddle she promised never to look back into his eyes if he would promise never to remember hers and how her kiss was the new day's sigeh but an arrow of empty to adam's rib of whim ______________ daark (owgish) 101 east then 10 east to old 66 south with the berdoo crew...sigeh is a shiite term for temporary marriage from a few minutes to 99 years... [This message has been edited by Dark Stranger (06-15-2009 11:05 AM).] |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Oh, this gives the feeling of a ride that accelerates the heartbeat. I am deeply fascinated by your visions. Again I would have to quote the whole poem, for it is quite simply perfect. Love, Margherita |
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Chalmette Guy Senior Member
since 2009-03-11
Posts 1257Louisiana |
Decipehering you is like working a Rubik's Cube. Fun, yet frustrating, but exhilirating mental gymnastics. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms mar, thanks lady friend.. ___________ cg..it is a pleasure to keep you "busy" amigo..again, just a ride east on the 101 to the 10 then onto old route 66 for a bit..watching the sun rise in front of me like meeting a woman for the first time..and never seeing her again this way.. |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed very much!  ARCTIC WIND |
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unboundpoetess Member
since 2008-05-24
Posts 477 |
Lovin' it D. H |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
AW thanks amigo _____________ UBP, thank you lady friend |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
VERY interesting 'write'! I am especially fond of: "she was a mistress of some eastern horizon that damp eyed whisperer always illusive just at the tip of the tongue nameless but she would laugh at the metal sounds that old bones in leather made at dawn when the ink of generations was tauten tempted to be but a sail catching dreams"... REALLY great stuff! sustained applause for this 'penning' !! |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
I see through your poetry and your eyes. A |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
2ndhand..thanks so much _____________ ms ali-san, thanks babe |
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