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A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

0 posted 2009-06-15 08:41 PM

Sitting softly upon blue mountains,
evening sun slowly hides away,
as the moon lights her mystic glow,
this is my heaven, resting here,

Alone with my thoughts,quietly alone,
The moon is glowing so brightly,
it is like the sun of night,
the same light after fireworks explode,

Shadows casting everywhere across the fields,
fields of houses, with soft warm glowing lights,
fireflies blinking in big tall pines,
across the meadows of green tall grass,

Peaceful,serene, tranquil,the whispers of the night,
so many thoughts come to my mind, looking,
resting back upon my elbows, I see the stars,
I can feel that soft, summer night breeze,
blowing gently across my face, through my hair,

I think about lovers long ago, lovers who stared,
at those very same stars, through the ages,
lovers who met secretly in the night,
how many wishes were made in the night,

Couples with hopes, dreams, newness,
laying in grass, making their wishes,
confessing their love to each other,
promising to love each other till the end of time,

The hoot of an owl breaks my thoughts,
my mind now back to where I am laying,
alone in a field of tall green grass,
on top of Blue Mountains, hearing the whispers of the night.

[This message has been edited by A Romantic Heart (06-16-2009 10:00 AM).]

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

1 posted 2009-06-15 08:47 PM

Very nicely done, ARH, with lovely imagery.

secondhanddreampoet
Member Ascendant

since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

2 posted 2009-06-15 10:14 PM

some fine 'slice of life' impressionistic imagery here!

I am especially fond of:

"I think about lovers long ago, lovers who stared,
at those very same stars, through the ages,
lovers who met secretly in the night,
how many wishes were made..."

"... promising to love each other till the end of time..."

The hoot of an owl breaks my thoughts...
I am laying ...
alone in a field of tall green grass,
on top of Blue Mountains, hearing the whispers of the night."

sustained applause for this 'penning' (the ending in particular!)

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

3 posted 2009-06-17 10:57 PM

First poem I click from yours you seem to amaze me! ~ wonderful stuff here

ARCTIC WIND

sim0riah
Member

since 2004-09-07

Posts 253
Wyoming USA

4 posted 2009-06-18 12:59 PM

I love the way you write. Always have always will.. Great stuff ARH!!

Rich

Heart2Heart
Senior Member

since 2009-05-15

Posts 738
Scotland/Norway

5 posted 2009-06-19 12:59 PM

This is beautiful and enchanting reading, your heartfelt words linger in my soul. Always a pleasure to read your fine poesy ARH.
Heart2Heart

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

6 posted 2009-06-20 04:31 AM

Serene and lovely thoughts, ARH.
Ida

Verve
Member

since 1999-06-23

Posts 348
Singapore

7 posted 2009-06-20 05:23 AM

Wonderful imagery... i really love the way you wrote this piece. =)

Suncleaver
Member

since 2009-01-18

Posts 481
Stafford England

8 posted 2009-06-22 07:02 AM

We will make our promises there, in whispers of night.

With love, Luke.

rad802
Member

since 2008-04-19

Posts 279
KY U.S.A.

9 posted 2009-06-22 07:31 PM

Nice write.

Rick A. Delmonico

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