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My Now Freed Soul
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My Now Freed Soul |
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Anniepimm Senior Member
since 2008-12-26
Posts 550England 
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 My Now Freed Soul Looking down a broken shell I saw That was me, but! no more; Amazed I felt no loss, no pain, no fear, At something Broken that I once held so dear, Things in the room seemed like shadows cast But I could slither through them which my form easily pasted Walls seemed to move before me, Away And the ceiling melted exposing a shining day, She must have gone, her pulse dose not exist, And a hand went to checkout the pulse on my wrist A device that checks my chest for breath She looks so beautiful in her final death, But I am not dead, I said with surprise Then a hand came up, to close my now staring eyes Yet my vision is still so bright and clear Their faces I could see, and there voices I could hear Now I am floating like some strange ethereal dream lifting me up on a celestial steam Into a river that heals my pain and makes me whole Taking away my now freed soul Annie 20-06-2009 [This message has been edited by Anniepimm (06-22-2009 07:11 PM).] |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
What a vision, dear Annie, like a NDE that heals forever from the fear of death. You soar beautifully here and expressed your feelings very well. Love and joy. Margherita |
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Anniepimm Senior Member
since 2008-12-26
Posts 550England |
Awwww thank you Margherita I am so glad you liked it, I was beginning to think no one did, you have made me happy  |
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