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Shadow in Blues' Mystery Challenge |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
Decieve yourself or choose denial each picks the way their path is styled Concerned therein does lie the liar insisting on an alibi Derived as if some ancient deev emboldened, caused us to believe our will is but a childs' toy no more than thus to them me boy, O' when days grow short pray tell will you have time that far along your tour or shall that future which ensues whisk by as fleeting seconds do I broach these questions in that you look close at what's designed to fool |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Ah, the introspection of Jupiter in retrograde... Your work is always so pristine. I admire that so much. Love to ya, doc.  I'll go clean something and ponder this a bit.  |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
serenity, Thanks, I do believe that's the first time my writing has beem called "pristine", lol. To work within the confines of a certain structure, I find forces one to be more creative in other areas, or at least that is my belief. Ty again m'dear. Doc |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
don't these people really bite sometimes... well done, and a very good example set in words for human kind to heed. hugs Lee J. |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
LeeJ, Thanks, if I follow your inference correctly, I'd have to disagree, I merely reap what I sow, hence my postings oft' drift into oblivion quite rapidly. I'm glad you found time to comment and liked what you saw enough to reply. Doc |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
I had to drop by for another read, and today see something totally different... today, I see life paths, from our choices made.... my pop pop used to say, the older the grow, the faster it goes...life is truly inspirational miraculous and a blessing.... |
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