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my first love

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khadidja
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since 12-03-2010
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0 posted 12-03-2010 01:02 PM       View Profile for khadidja   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for khadidja



he told him things that I never told
he calls me names that I have never been called
I love things that I never loved
I have things that I never had
I wrote poems that I never wrote
I said things that I never said
I find things that I never found
I'm doing things that I never thought I could
near to him my heart beating like it never been sound
I'm hearing songs that I never heard
they seem all the same
it sing only his name
it bring only the pain
a lot of clouds and rain
  the person that I could change for him
                  DOESN'T LOVE ME
what should I do ..what should I say
I'm so lost in this way
my heart is down on it knees
but this is how the way it is
can't change it
I love him and don't ask me why
the pain in my heart is so high
the way he looks the way he walks the way he say my name
the fact that he can't see me drive me insane
I know this is too much to ask
but this is all I've got
I'm not pretty , always bored
so invisible , living in my own world
I cry easily I look horribly
I'm too nice , no matter what it takes
  always by your side
I don't know if that's good or bad
but this is all I have

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   I didn't finish  it
plz give me ur comments
thank u
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XGarapanX
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since 06-19-2008
Posts 1416
Rekjavik Iceland


1 posted 01-02-2011 05:58 AM       View Profile for XGarapanX   Email XGarapanX   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit XGarapanX's Home Page   View IP for XGarapanX

The sincerity and the emotions are very moving.

·´~`·­»Garapan«­·´~`·

khadidja
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since 12-03-2010
Posts 16


2 posted 01-02-2011 04:09 PM       View Profile for khadidja   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for khadidja

thank u my friend

Sunshine
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Member Caelestus
since 06-25-99
Posts 67715
Listening to every heart


3 posted 01-02-2011 07:30 PM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

You need to finish this,
on the upswing of all that is YOU...
and if all of this has created
within you the need/want/desire
to write?

Then it was all worthy...so I will
look for more from you.

Please check your email
for a Very Special Greeting!

" It matters not this distance now  " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love
~*~
KRJ

Sara Mikael
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since 09-12-2008
Posts 34


4 posted 01-03-2011 08:09 AM       View Profile for Sara Mikael   Email Sara Mikael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sara Mikael

it'so honest

khadidja
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since 12-03-2010
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5 posted 01-03-2011 12:05 PM       View Profile for khadidja   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for khadidja

thank u guys I really aperciate it

and a special thanks for sunshine for the greeting card and your care

thank u very much again I'll do my best
khadidja
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since 12-03-2010
Posts 16


6 posted 01-06-2011 02:37 PM       View Profile for khadidja   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for khadidja

back..

..
I'm lazy I watch too much television
chat for hours without a reason
wating for u to show up
cuz when I talk to u I light up
thinking all the  time and even stay up
smiling to the comuter like a fool
I don't care as long Im with you
what is exosting that I never mean to
          I never mean to love u
this feeling kills me tear me apart
to know this is all I've got
I see nothing at the mirore when u cant see me
I can't hear my self when u can't hear me
I saw nightmares when I dont see u in my dreams
u have NO idea how it feels
    negleged, fergotten,alone..
  feeling like this is the life that u own

  hidden, sceard , fear
facing everything alone with a facke smile and a lot of tears

but what an incradble friends I have
they do everything to not to make u feel that bad

but this feeling kills me ..tear me apart
so confused..I don't know a lot

I should stop writing and revising
but I have NO strengh to keep going

I'm tierd ..tierd ..of failing and dissappointing
tierd of keep trying and trying
tierd of beeing tierd
tierd if beeing silent
I want to speak
I want to scream

      but no one listenn no one care
     I have no one that I can share
          this terrible feelings  I have

this is what life bring
I'm so confused ..I dont know a thing
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dont forget the comment
thank u

Starcitta
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since 01-21-2011
Posts 18
WY, USA


7 posted 01-23-2011 10:27 PM       View Profile for Starcitta   Email Starcitta   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Starcitta

that was amazing, even if its a long poem, it flows throughout, you truly expressed your feelings. And i respect that, well done

Amor Y Lagrimas

khadidja
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since 12-03-2010
Posts 16


8 posted 01-26-2011 01:50 PM       View Profile for khadidja   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for khadidja

thx thx my friend
I know its long ..I'll try to make it shorter and better

thank u for ur comment ..I aperciate it
XGarapanX
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since 06-19-2008
Posts 1416
Rekjavik Iceland


9 posted 01-28-2011 02:04 AM       View Profile for XGarapanX   Email XGarapanX   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit XGarapanX's Home Page   View IP for XGarapanX

This is powerful.

·´~`·­»Garapan«­·´~`·  "Look! Crumbs on his jacketses... Heeee took it!"

khadidja
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since 12-03-2010
Posts 16


10 posted 02-19-2011 03:05 PM       View Profile for khadidja   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for khadidja

thank u my friend
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