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born on a thought
i act on impulse
a simple reaction to an action
turns a moment into a memory
the ones we hold dear and keep near
while the rest dwindle and burn low
to be forgotten by next week

an imaginable feeling
grows with time
indescibable to many
yet understood by few more
this is a lesson learned in time
a lesson learned in life

~ you cant run from yourself ~

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very nice
Krysti
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Very true.
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Hope nobody minds if I break the trend!

Anyway, I love how the poem flows, but doesn't go anywhere: it doesn't have to. Like a still frame, it perfectly captured what you had to say.

Very deep.

There is power in the pen.

 
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