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born on a thought |
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Clockwork_Orange Senior Member
since 2007-03-23
Posts 620Space Camp, IN 
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born on a thought i act on impulse a simple reaction to an action turns a moment into a memory the ones we hold dear and keep near while the rest dwindle and burn low to be forgotten by next week an imaginable feeling grows with time indescibable to many yet understood by few more this is a lesson learned in time a lesson learned in life ~ you cant run from yourself ~ |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
very nice  Krysti |
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Falling rain
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois |
Very true. -Zach |
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Assassin_of_Verse Member
since 2007-10-23
Posts 330that So Cal |
Hope nobody minds if I break the trend! Anyway, I love how the poem flows, but doesn't go anywhere: it doesn't have to. Like a still frame, it perfectly captured what you had to say. Very deep. There is power in the pen. |
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