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XxForever.BrokenxX
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Sorry about the title, I thought it would catch a certain persons attention.
_________

I'm sorry if I hurt you,
I never meant to fall.
But now that I'm at the bottom,
I'll catch you if I need to.

I know you feel alone,
but honestly, look around.
I'm still with you,
I always will be here.

Don't cry tonight,
I'm just as scared as you.
I still want to be your friend,
I'm still here no matter what.

Trust me,
I never thought little of you,
you could always make me smile.

{~~*~~}

__________________________
I don't know if the person this is meant for will read it, or catch on. But if you do, I really am sorry for anything I did wrong. I miss being your friend.

Lacrimosa Dies Illa
[Oh that tearful day]
    {~~*~~}

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1 posted 08-30-2009 03:54 AM       View Profile for Alison   Email Alison   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alison

I kind of liked the title.  Hope the poem worked and you are friends again.

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2 posted 08-31-2009 08:11 PM       View Profile for Falling rain   Email Falling rain   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Falling rain's Home Page   View IP for Falling rain

I like this. But may I ask. For who is this for? Curious.

-Zach
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3 posted 09-01-2009 04:30 PM       View Profile for XxForever.BrokenxX   Email XxForever.BrokenxX   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for XxForever.BrokenxX

I wrote it for you, a while ago.


{~~*~~}


Lacrimosa Dies Illa
[Oh that tearful day]
    {~~*~~}

[This message has been edited by XxForever.BrokenxX (09-02-2009 12:07 AM).]

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4 posted 09-03-2009 09:34 PM       View Profile for Alison   Email Alison   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alison

I sure hope you guys are friends again - and if you are, I'll just eat the brownies in the rain (if ya'll don't mind and all).

xoxoxo
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5 posted 09-15-2009 03:08 PM       View Profile for Falling rain   Email Falling rain   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Falling rain's Home Page   View IP for Falling rain

Haha. Julianna thought it was for me. I was skeptical. :P

-Zach
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Beautifully captured.
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thats because i'm the smart one there, zach

lovely poem em, its the nicest thing

julianna

.:.:~]you clicked your heals and wished for me[~:.:.

 
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