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stacylynn418
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since 2009-03-06
Posts 40
new york

0 posted 2009-08-23 01:34 AM


No, there's no life in this one.
Air fills her lungs
And blood is running through her veins,
But those eyes...
Look at those eyes.
Lifeless.
Apathy got the best of this one.
I don't think we can save her now.
No,
It's too late.
You can't save everyone.
This one...
This one can't feel you anyway.
God...look at those eyes.

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Ravagence
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since 2009-08-16
Posts 79

1 posted 2009-09-21 03:39 PM


sent shivers up my spine..delightful(:
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