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hunnie_girl
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0 posted 06-16-2009 02:41 AM       View Profile for hunnie_girl   Email hunnie_girl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for hunnie_girl


Now here's a little story
about a girl who played a game
her methods always varied
but her intentions were the same

She was just another pretty face
and every guy fell for her lies
who knows maybe she did care
or it was just an innocent disguise

one by one she hurt them
until one day she met a man
the one she always dreamed of
and he even had a tan

she never thought he'd hurt her
but he had another plan in mind
he gave her a dose of her own medicine
skipped town, left her behind

now back to playing her game
nothing changed nothing learned
but now she's on a defense
just in case the tables turned

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1 posted 06-16-2009 09:43 PM       View Profile for Falling rain   Email Falling rain   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Falling rain's Home Page   View IP for Falling rain

This is sooo good! Better then what I would write. :}

-Zach

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2 posted 06-18-2009 08:18 AM       View Profile for priyanka   Email priyanka   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for priyanka

WOW!!! that was real good... but sad the guy left
freeand2sexy
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3 posted 06-18-2009 07:26 PM       View Profile for freeand2sexy   Email freeand2sexy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit freeand2sexy's Home Page   View IP for freeand2sexy

I really like this, it's very good and it flowed nicely

The hardest part about writing poetry,
is trying not to write like everyone else.

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4 posted 06-18-2009 09:32 PM       View Profile for RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed

Ahhhhhhhhhhh it's great!!!!!! Though, sad she didn't learn. Awwwwwwwwwwwwwww I missed you soooooooo!

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   Kate

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5 posted 06-19-2009 12:23 AM       View Profile for Earl Robertson   Email Earl Robertson   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Earl Robertson

Hunnie. That. Was. Amazing.

Library.

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This is great!
love the way it flowed.
& what the poem was about.

Very good!

xxx
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7 posted 06-20-2009 06:39 PM       View Profile for kindredspirit   Email kindredspirit   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for kindredspirit

a sad story, but one that is seen all to often in today's generation.
you wrote it well, with perfect rhyme and flow.
meganne_77
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8 posted 06-21-2009 05:38 PM       View Profile for meganne_77   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for meganne_77

wow i loved that.. good rhythm... good job

-meg-
 
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