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Red Rose
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Red Rose |
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Earl Robertson Senior Member
since 2008-01-21
Posts 753BC, Canada |
Red rose Fly with me Cliff jump From the man Romeo Save Juliet Gingerbread Lure slowly Still red rose Speak to me Running cliff Walk with me It’s in that Moment When you know You can jump The gun is loaded The poison is drunk The train is racing now Like a red ribbon flying The sun is setting now On two kids in a candy house Tip your cards and play the game Witches brew and whispered name Juliet Save Romeo For the gold Dawn is breaking Ancient scroll Speak for them Leave me lie Never flee Red Rose Fly with me Ginger door Be silk for me My melancholy is purely my own |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
FRANK!!! I missed you!! lol I loved this very opposite of cliche I think! which is good because its different and i loved it! |
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Falling rain
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois |
To be honest I didn't understand a bit of this. Maybe I need a cup of coffee first before reading due to the fact I just woke up.  lol I'll read it again later and see if it made a difference. But I did like the wording you put in this. -Zach "Who are you to judge the life I live? I know I'm not perfect" - Bob Marley |
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Earl Robertson Senior Member
since 2008-01-21
Posts 753BC, Canada |
Zach, Zach, Zach expecting to understand my poetry... Mine!! how foolish... My melancholy is purely my own |
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RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed Senior Member
since 2007-06-11
Posts 1062In Love <3 |
I LOVEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE THIS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! that much! -Kate "What are you!?" |
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nehematala Member
since 2009-05-21
Posts 129 |
This is amazing If your parents never had children, chances are you won't, either. |
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freeand2sexy Senior Member
since 2008-09-12
Posts 704CA, USA |
This is interesting! Which translates to- "I have no clue what this poem means, but I like it!" The hardest part about writing poetry, |
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Earl Robertson Senior Member
since 2008-01-21
Posts 753BC, Canada |
Thanks guys! Surely someone will take a stab at the meaning... To fly is to fall and miss the sidewalk |
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LittleWillow Member
since 2007-12-27
Posts 54 |
This is great! Love the words you used! FAB! xx |
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kindredspirit Member
since 2009-05-19
Posts 156 |
In an attempt to decipher your symbolism, it seems as if you wrote of taking a chance at trust, or at love. I'm going to be sitting up tonight thinking of your words, of this poem. You write in a seductive manner, pulling me in. I couldn't stop reading if I tried.. Not that i would want to. |
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Earl Robertson Senior Member
since 2008-01-21
Posts 753BC, Canada |
HAHA Spirit's almost got it!! What can you guys do with that?!?! To fly is to fall and miss the sidewalk |
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