looking back toward tomorrow

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Open Poetry #43

looking back toward tomorrow

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2008-09-06 07:02 AM

I would always remember your mouth
and how it moved around words
that you were not saying loud enough

to get out of the window of you
and onto the windshield of me
but we were top down anyway

and somehow I got the drift
just before we pulled over
and talked with our eyes

while the others drove by fast
just to look in mirrors to see
how our story ended if it did

and as of tomorrow it hadn't yet

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daark

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2008-09-06 07:50 AM

You remember ever so beautifully, dear D., may the story never end. Love your title too, it sounds reassuring.

Love,
Margherita

"Love is the One who masters all things;
I am mastered totally by Love."
(Rumi)

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

2 posted 2008-09-06 08:23 AM

Ms mar you bless me with your touch

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

3 posted 2008-09-07 11:19 AM

Always enjoy your writes!

ARCTIC WIND

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

4 posted 2008-09-08 02:48 AM

So as they gazed into their rear view mirrors, they caught a glimpse of the next chapter?

A

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

5 posted 2008-09-08 05:50 AM

a&w, thanks my friend...

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ms ali-san, perhaps yes, or where they had been..thanks babe

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