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Balladeer
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0 posted 2008-09-04 05:53 PM



Hanna, Ike and Josephine
Mother Nature getting mean!
Strangest sight I've ever seen
Hanna, Ike and Josephine.

Three disaster is a row
See them come and hear them blow
Pop some corn and watch the show
Will they hit us? We don't know.

Hanna's Carolina-bound
Ike's the next to come around.
No such thing as higher ground
Wind can make a nasty sound

Josephine is still too far.
Time to hoist one at the bar.
Hide! She won't know where you are
(But don't forget to pack the car!)

Hanna, Ike and Josephine
Scenario is quite obscene.
Mother Nature, you ARE mean!
Hanna, Ike and Josephine.



© Copyright 2008 Michael Mack - All Rights Reserved
Robert E. Jordan
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1 posted 2008-09-04 06:11 PM


Yo Balladeer,

This is excellent.  It's good you can have a little fun with your Florida disasters.

Good luck to you down there.

Bobby

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2 posted 2008-09-04 06:28 PM


What a trio indeed! This is such an impressive write. Mother nature will hear you and start right away an examination of conscience!

May they quickly fade!

Love,
Margherita

sewasham
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3 posted 2008-09-04 11:33 PM


Storms are brewing dear oh dear
But what the Pipsters greatly fear
Is that before they disappear
They’ll blow away ol’ Balladeer

Those storms are just a piece of cake
For there’s much worse he’s had to take
And we’ve seen him survive the wake
Of the foulest winds to ever break

For hurricanes may come and go
But there’s no need to worry though
‘Cause none of them will ever blow
As much hot air as poor ole Toe


Hope you're anchored down well buddy.
Take care and Have fun. Steve


TheAnonDavid
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4 posted 2008-09-05 05:10 AM


Even with the advent of the possible disaster you face I appreciate the humour - and the quality - of this poem
Poet deVine
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5 posted 2008-09-05 05:27 AM


pack the car
get out of Dodge
head to Georgia
at the Econolodge

Take the dog
the parakeet too
looks like Ike
is coming for you

this simply rhyme
was not meant to scare
but to show
we really care

hurricane? yes!
I can relate
I'm also a citizen
of the plywood state!

(Be safe..Ike's coming your way)

Kit McCallum
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6 posted 2008-09-05 06:49 AM


Somthing's coming in the air,
Can't believe they're really there,
Three no less to feed the fear,
Take care, our sweet Balladeer.



I love your sense of poetic humour in amongst
the storm watch Michael. Wonderful as always.



You take care sweet poet, and be safe!

Best wishes and hugs,
/Kit

Balladeer
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7 posted 2008-09-05 08:45 AM


Well, looks like the hurricanes have spawned some clever poetry, at least

Thank you all for joining in. Laughter (and preparation) is about all we have right now. Be safe, Poet deVine and all the rest of the Florida and southeastern poets. Could be a bumpy ride.

btw, I'm throwing away my I LIKE IKE buttons today!

Poet deVine
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8 posted 2008-09-05 09:52 AM


I'm trying to batten down my hatches but they're under water from Fay and Hanna! It's very hard to nail a wet hatch!


I think Florida should just build a big pontoon around it and we can float out of harm's way each time!

Mark Bohannan
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9 posted 2008-09-05 11:32 AM


Take out a sail and some in line skates, point it north and when you reach the shores just 4 states north of you, I will have a hot cup of coffee and a "SPAM" sandwich waiting.  Mother nature can indeed have an attitude now and then, but can you blame her?  A pleasure to read you as always sir Balladear.
JamesMichael
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10 posted 2008-09-05 06:25 PM


Hope those hurricanes take it easy on you guys...James
Marchmadness
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11 posted 2008-09-06 03:31 AM


Love the poetic humor even in the face of disaster. Hope you all stay safe and well.
                                 Ida

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12 posted 2008-09-06 10:17 AM


Stay safe all. We were in Homestead for Andrew. Hurricanes are some scary beasts.
Elizabeth Santos
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13 posted 2008-09-06 01:34 PM


Balladeer, when winds are blowin
Stays behind to write a poem
Never mind the hurricane
Poetry's what keeps him sane

Keep on writing , BAlladeer
Even though Ike's getting near
When frenzied cyclones strike again
Wait for the eye, and grab your pen!

Great to read your perfect verses!
Miss you!
Liz

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14 posted 2008-09-06 02:50 PM


Stay safe!!
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15 posted 2008-09-06 11:06 PM


Very well written and fun to read in the face of disaster.  Joyce
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16 posted 2008-09-07 08:14 PM


My sister was in Gustav's direct path (they're okay - even with one tree on the roof and another through a window, the damage wasn't bad - but they lost 2 computers and a TV from a lightning strike that hit the cable wires) and I haven't unpacked my "go" bag since Eduardo... this seems to be another hurricane season from hell.

Thanks for the touch of levity... I didn't think those danged things could make me grin... but you proved that theory wrong! *G*

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17 posted 2008-09-08 02:40 AM


I am glad that you are here still to make me smile as you do.

A

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