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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 2008-08-21 05:56 AM



and our passing around of the history
of our own geography
nonchalantly between us
like the alternating sipping
of something sweet from our lips

letting our hands be friends
like the lovers on tv do
but ours are movie length touches
that we have put on slow motion
so they last a lifetime channel worth

not to mention the mountains and valleys
and other things that rise and fall
between our continents as we call them
pretending to be in earthquakes
when no one is looking at us for moments

before another song makes us gods again
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daark

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1 posted 2008-08-21 09:09 AM


such a cool write mister
Margherita
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2 posted 2008-08-21 10:48 AM


There isn't a way to read you without wanting to ... scream, yes, I mean those laughter giggle sounds that we make inconsciously when we have discovered something that fits our needs of beauty, of emotions, of artistic expression and of joy of living ...

So good that you are humble with regard to your offerings, isn't it?

Love,
Margherita

"Love is the One who masters all things;
I am mastered totally by Love."
(Rumi)

Dark Stranger
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3 posted 2008-08-21 02:58 PM


Ms suesea thanks sexy mrs


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Ms mar you punish me with your delightful kindness, thank you ms

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4 posted 2008-08-22 01:38 AM


You smile me with this one, D.

A

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5 posted 2008-08-22 07:00 PM


*thud*

Ya gotta quit doing that thing you do
to me babe.     I'm never gonna get up offa the floor at this rate!!  

I truly enjoyed the mastery of your words here m'friend...

I repeat, if you'd bind it,
I'd buy it.  

Sunshine
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6 posted 2008-08-22 09:06 PM


quote:
...but ours are movie length touches
that we have put on slow motion
so they last a lifetime channel worth...


your poems do such a wonderful lingering that Alfred Hitchcock could have hired you for the tender touches between scream scenes.

  

And that, Sir, is a high compliment.

Gaelynsgirl
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7 posted 2008-08-22 10:38 PM


You find and deliver the slow motion emotion faster than any poet or man I've read before.
These thoughts are gifts and the personalized  wrapping touches all of us fortunate enough to be on the receiving/reading end.

thank you Daark...

Dark Stranger
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8 posted 2008-08-23 06:24 AM


ms ali-san, thanks babe for the little touch

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ms gs, thank you donna for bringing me a smile with your thud shoes on

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ms sun, always a place to watch the instant replays...thanks babe


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ms lynda, you sooth my moments with those comments, thanks ms

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