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Sunshine
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0 posted 2008-08-21 04:30 PM



The "don't write a poem with the word Blush" challenge

He could feel his color rising
To a ruddiness of ill content
For she had given his life a lift
As he caught her lingering scent.

Embarrassment filled his lonely soul
And he flushed at her loveliness
He felt so very red in the face
As he fantasized over one sweet kiss.


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" It matters not this distance now  " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love
~*~
KRJ

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Earth Angel
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1 posted 2008-08-21 05:04 PM


Well, m'dear shining sun, methinks you did it!

~ and rather well, at that! I'm sure that the Temptress will give you an A+.

Love & Sun Light,
Linda

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2 posted 2008-08-21 05:32 PM


A+ indeed! Thanks for playing!

"...buried way beneath the sheets
I think she's having a meltdown..."
"Buckcherry"

Margherita
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3 posted 2008-08-21 05:37 PM


Very lovely, dear Karilea. Makes me want to give it a try too... might be fun.

Love,
Margherita

"Love is the One who masters all things;
I am mastered totally by Love."
(Rumi)

Sunshine
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4 posted 2008-08-21 05:39 PM


Well, it's not great but it was fun! At least my muse stayed for a split second!

I hope others will take up the challenge, m'friend!


Martie
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5 posted 2008-08-21 05:49 PM


Hi Sissie....me thinks you hit the nail on the blush.   Maybe I'll do this too.  Hi Temptress!
LindsayP
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6 posted 2008-08-21 09:55 PM



Short but very very sweet dear Karilea

with great rhyming, thanks for sharing.

Lindsay

Ericc
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7 posted 2008-08-22 03:14 PM


Wow...!!!!!

Eric

nourzihane
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8 posted 2008-08-23 02:40 AM


Dear sunshine

when i see this name i don't know why do i trust that there is a creativity
under this name.
i find the world of beauty between it lines which takes our hands to beauty
the letter deficited to give you the right of writing but it certainly was carrying between deficit 1000 flower of thank.

accept my deep thank

love
nourzihane




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