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Honeybunch
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0 posted 2008-08-13 12:47 PM


The gifted, the wise, the pastors, the wives,
the noblemen, preachers, and poor humble beings,
turn feelings to words in attempts to describe
the emotion of love, if there such a thing be.

Not gifted or wise, no longer a wife,
I stumble through love with the pen of my mind.

It’s lacking in substance and cannot be seen
yet in the market it barters a give and take fee
but the fee is a feeling exchanged for free
so it could be construed as an invalid deal.

Too it is given with no earthly reward
so the gold in our hearts must be ill gotten gains
and the castles it builds are made out of air
so, therefore, love’s castles are not meant to be.

It doesn’t have legs to cross the divide
between mother earth and heavenly sky
so it’s surely not love when we think we see stars.

If love is the greatest, who taught it to play
sweet lilting music to which we all sway?

Its mission I’ll say, but then won’t deny it,
is to find a “something” that’s missing inside us
but whichever, however, it destructs if ignored
and, therefore, must be as if it was not.

What is love? It’s a thought, an idea, a wishing to be,
a prayer, a hope, and the longing in me,
but if one day it knocked, would I even know?
Would you?

Helen



© Copyright 2008 Helen - All Rights Reserved
SEA
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1 posted 2008-08-13 09:14 AM


"If love is the greatest, who taught it to play
sweet lilting music to which we all sway? "

very cool thoughts here

Margherita
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2 posted 2008-08-13 11:00 AM


Interesting thoughts beautifully weaved together, dear Helen! Michael too will enjoy it!

Love IS. It is the life giving force and we are meant to share it with every breath, sometimes we simply are unaware.

Love and hugs.
Margherita

Artic Wind
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3 posted 2008-08-13 11:43 AM


For me!?! Ahhh Why thank you....

"What is love?" thats a big question , That I believe can only be answered by you wanting to know very much. It's your own opinion, once you got it, share it with other people so they can all have one big paragraph on what love is.

Yes, I do believe that when Love is gone from you, I think you would feel it dearest Helen, because the ones we truly love won't be in our hearts anymore and thats VERY noticeable lol

Love is a powerful Force in the human mind and body and Soul.

Lovely Write Helen, I really enjoyed reading you're thoughts on this subject! ~May love fill you're life

to you
ARCTIC WIND

Honeybunch
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4 posted 2008-08-13 01:00 PM


Thanks Sea, Msrgherita, and AC!  This was written many years ago and I must admit to being no wiser now.  I guess it's true that love "is" and what it is and why it is perhaps not necessary to know - just feel it.  

We all soldier on regardless though.

Hugs
Helen

Artic Wind
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5 posted 2008-08-13 10:03 PM


Margherita I do like this Write Helen had written!


ARCTIC WIND

LindsayP
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6 posted 2008-08-14 12:35 PM



Top accolades for that one Helen,

One of your best. much enjoyed. Love

Lindsay

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7 posted 2008-08-14 12:47 PM


thanks for reposting! I think I missed it before.
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