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Margherita
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0 posted 2008-08-09 12:28 PM





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Forever aglow:

adamantine particles

hold my love for you



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© Copyright 2008 Margherita Rueger - All Rights Reserved
Robert E. Jordan
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1 posted 2008-08-09 12:39 PM


Yo dear Margherita,

This is a lovely picture and haiku--impenetrable in the right way.

Love Bobby

Artic Wind
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2 posted 2008-08-09 02:28 PM


Lovely Write dear Margherita!


ARCTIC WIND

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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3 posted 2008-08-09 11:14 PM


magical Margherita..    love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Marchmadness
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4 posted 2008-08-10 02:28 AM


Hi Margharita, I haven't been on the site much for a few days because I was busy fighting of a bout of pneumonia.I never seem to do anything in a normal way, I always get these nasty colds and things in the summer time and then I have a terrible time getting rid of them. Just reading your lovely Hiaku with that pretty picture makes me feel better already.
                             Ida

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5 posted 2008-08-10 02:37 AM


Margherita,

It is like you take me on a journey of beautiful.  

Love,
Alison

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6 posted 2008-08-10 06:21 AM


Margherita~

Such a lovely quilling~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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I just learned a new word. (adamantine)

very cool, really pretty picture, and loved the haiku


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8 posted 2008-08-10 12:44 PM


he breaks out his worn dictionary...
looking, looking, ......wait,  I
think...sheesh!

nourzihane
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9 posted 2008-08-11 05:17 AM


dear margherita

Although the topic is very short but it's wonderful

thank you

nourzihane

Margherita
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10 posted 2008-08-11 06:03 AM


Thank you all my dear Poet friends for your kind comments! It is a joy to read you all.

Dear Ida, may you quickly recover and feel perfectly well again!

Love,
Margherita

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11 posted 2008-08-11 06:44 PM


Delightful, Margherita.

Ida, I'm sending you a huge slice of my health!

- Owl

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12 posted 2008-08-11 11:53 PM


Loves kaleidoscope is indeed a brilliant show of affections.

So pretty, Margherita

Earth Angel
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13 posted 2008-08-13 11:25 PM


Maga Margherita, a love like that
will be as solid as a diamond
and shine forevermore!

I also adored the painting!

Another beauty!
~ simply stated but with
a whole lotta meaning!


Angelo Terrestre

[This message has been edited by Earth Angel (08-14-2008 12:11 AM).]

LindsayP
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14 posted 2008-08-14 12:18 PM



Dito for Linda's comment dear Marherita

a lovely post.

Lindsay

Margherita
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15 posted 2008-08-14 04:56 AM


Thank you so much my friends Diana, Lori, Linda and Lindsay for your loving comments.


Margherita

"Love is the One who masters all things;
I am mastered totally by Love."
(Rumi)

Prasad Nataraj
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16 posted 2008-08-15 02:34 PM


Margherita, I don’t know much about haiku, however this so good and nice to read. Like the picture too, diamonds are very expensive and precious ones like your poems. Prasad
byski
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17 posted 2008-08-27 11:01 PM


I am guessing that this is a reference to your wedding ring, am I right?
Margherita
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18 posted 2008-08-28 07:09 AM


Thank you dear Prasad, I do love diamonds can't deny that, but in lack of them I enjoy wearing my zircons or crystals ... they sparkle too. But the heart sparks are the most beautiful ones ...

Dear byski, thank you so much for your loving reply. I do love your interpretation, though I had something purely spiritual in mind (btw. I lost my first wedding ring in the sea while swimming and the second was stolen - together with a most beautiful 25th anniversary ring especially designed by my husband with an acquamarine and two small diamonds representing our children, sigh - , now I wear sometimes the wedding ring given to me by my mother in law).

Love,
Margherita  


"Love is the One who masters all things;
I am mastered totally by Love."
(Rumi)

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