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Ericc
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0 posted 2008-07-12 03:47 PM



Rain against
Me –
And in your giving
Storm…my arid flesh
Becomes alive.



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Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
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Realms of Light
1 posted 2008-07-12 03:50 PM



"Rain against
Me –
And in your giving
Storm…my arid flesh
Becomes alive."

~ Okay! If you insist!



Oh, excuse me!
I got a little bit carried away!
I do so love the rain! lol


Linda

A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03
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Forever In Your Heart
2 posted 2008-07-12 04:03 PM


Your flesh I dry with my breath~

whispering my words upon you,

until nothing but vapor appears!



~ARH

XGarapanX
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since 2008-06-19
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3 posted 2008-07-12 11:46 PM


You are all making me blush.

·´~`·­»Garapan«­·´~`·

Magnus
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4 posted 2008-07-13 12:29 PM


Blush?  He pauses...

Nice lines.

Margherita
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Eternity
5 posted 2008-07-14 12:07 PM


Rain is always so powerfully energizing! This is lovely.

I am happy that you feel alive and that you are blooming like an oasis, dear Eric.


Margherita


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