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Open Poetry #42

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vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

0 posted 2008-04-11 06:36 PM

When our life becomes empty
To our hearts,
To our soul
The whole world turns on you,
Your love starts to burn
To your heart
Your life is like a burning candle
To fill your emptiness
To fill your heart
We try to find peace and love
To your empty life
We try to find another day
To shine
We cry often each way
To find a path to love
When we feel lonely
We try to find something
And we seek
In our soul
We will bring is peace and love,
During our sorrow and pain
Let it rain
Let us show love
to one another

hiddensmiles
Senior Member

since 2008-02-07

Posts 514
at the beach... i wish

1 posted 2008-04-11 06:46 PM

great

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

2 posted 2008-04-12 09:18 AM

Enjoyed your soft words...James

effjayel
Senior Member

since 2007-09-30

Posts 1474
At the Crossroads of Infinity

3 posted 2008-04-12 02:20 PM

Vandana, this is very nice...written for the heart from the heart, good job John

shyvl
Senior Member

since 2008-04-11

Posts 531
texas, usa

4 posted 2008-04-12 03:27 PM

very moving in simple terms everyone can relate to.
sharyn

Larrysmom
Senior Member

since 2008-04-03

Posts 533
Florida, USA

5 posted 2008-04-12 10:25 PM

Oh this is beautiful… So giving and caring.

Thank you so very much for sharing this.

Tammy<333

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