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Open Poetry #42

Kaleidoscope

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2008-04-09 08:45 AM

Kaleidoscope

I watch transparent as the
sunlight decorates dancing
warm painting the liquid cold
shifting images distorted flow
and captured tints explode
ever changing mosaics
float aimlessly undirected
continually changing tiles
the hand of wind stirs colors
in kaleidoscope of water
shifted with altered direction
blank canvas moves in ripples
correcting damage of the blur
in the grace of the gulf’s gallery

"no darkness has ever been deep enough to extinguish my personal knowledge of love" Anne Rice

Seoulair
Senior Member

since 2008-03-27

Posts 807
Seoul S.Korea

1 posted 2008-04-09 11:30 AM

beautiful and soft and ( slow paced this time.)
Love the beauty.

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

2 posted 2008-04-10 07:52 PM

Each brush stroke is rendered with a soft touch of grace.

Fabulous painting in poetry, slick lady~

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

3 posted 2008-04-10 10:29 PM

Wow.

shaking my head

And I know you did this without peyote.

You never cease to amaze me, lady!

A captivating ride.

squeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeze