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Open Poetry #42

woven on a bud

RedStoneEB
Senior Member

since 2003-06-08

Posts 772
uk

0 posted 2008-04-07 09:56 AM

I dare say my heart of late is written in the buds,
thus I awake to the smell of indifference in the flowers--
ah, my foolish soul to bleed its eyes shut;
never to taste that of an unspotted beauteous
flute that makes no sound but the power of
a scent within the air, to breathe like fire.

Whilst yet she wanders what to say
’tis just words that bloom today--
unread, but predictable; have I
wandered lost into a wishing well.

Finding my dreams for what they really are
all but a nervous thought written down--
laced inside my heart, to hold secure to
these thoughts I know just like the flowers
sometimes I get over-watered.

Still, go on…listen to the buds dancing
each containing truth within the movement,
hush now for I sadly do not have nature’s hand
to appear after all has wilted anew, but
we my love need to be joined.

So I’ve woven a special bud for you
which shall be called our own--
thus in awakening I shall smell you
everyday, even though you do not know.

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2008-04-07 10:42 AM

Dear Lee, it's great to see you are back and with such a wondrous, romantic write!

Very beautiful!

Love,
Margherita

Seoulair
Senior Member

since 2008-03-27

Posts 807
Seoul S.Korea

2 posted 2008-04-07 08:30 PM

absolutely beautiful!!!
enjoyed.

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

3 posted 2008-04-07 08:37 PM

beauty in sadness

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2008-04-10 05:34 PM

Enjoyed...James

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