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hiddensmiles
Senior Member
since 2008-02-07
Posts 514
at the beach... i wish

0 posted 2008-03-31 01:43 PM


sorrows hidden
in my
smile

tears should
drip
from these eyes

but they dont
nothing happens
as it should

i'm unwanted
i'm a horror
to the universe

JJ

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gilead
Senior Member
since 2008-03-10
Posts 1067
nevada, USA
1 posted 2008-03-31 03:07 PM


"For I reckon this present suffering cannot be compared to the glory that will be revealed in us." ---Romans 8:14

No matter what my failings may be, I believe in hope, sometimes in seeming hopelessness! We are all worthwhile.

Someone who cares,

Art

Seoulair
Senior Member
since 2008-03-27
Posts 807
Seoul S.Korea
2 posted 2008-03-31 03:11 PM


Sad!
Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California
3 posted 2008-03-31 03:14 PM


Some people just aren't criers, but they hurt just as much or more. I hope you start to feel better soon.
                              Ida

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
4 posted 2008-03-31 04:49 PM


I've felt like this a few times...but you're not unwanted, you just haven't found the right person that wants you...family comes to mind...reconnecting to the family is the first step...James
hiddensmiles
Senior Member
since 2008-02-07
Posts 514
at the beach... i wish
5 posted 2008-04-07 12:49 PM


thank you

JJ

hiddensmiles
Senior Member
since 2008-02-07
Posts 514
at the beach... i wish
6 posted 2008-04-10 08:18 PM


very much

JJ

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