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Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

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Listening to every heart

0 posted 2008-04-04 02:51 PM

Falling Apart

Words run sing-song in my heart
tripping over each other, laughing
at falling apart

running, dashing through these memories
laughing, cavorting and making
sport of me

sometimes little words, over and over again
like “I love you”, “I adore you”
and then

briefly steps in some misery so old
“I told you so” steps forth bold
and then it's when

words run sing-song in my heart
tripping and laughing
at falling apart.

19 September, 2000
©Karilea Rilling Jungel

gilead
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since 2008-03-10

Posts 1067
nevada, USA

1 posted 2008-04-04 03:23 PM

So resoundingly true to life, and beautifully expressed!

Art

Seoulair
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since 2008-03-27

Posts 807
Seoul S.Korea

2 posted 2008-04-04 04:44 PM

beautiful!!

2islander2
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since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

3 posted 2008-04-04 04:48 PM

it's an interesting poem,I discovered that words can make sing song and i like the idea of playing with words...

I like your work.

Yann

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2008-04-04 05:06 PM

I don't think I would have it any other way

sarlou
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since 2008-03-23

Posts 16
burnley,lancashire,england

5 posted 2008-04-04 05:27 PM

loved it... thank you
sarah

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

6 posted 2008-04-04 08:32 PM

beautifully expressed Karilea... love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

effjayel
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since 2007-09-30

Posts 1474
At the Crossroads of Infinity

7 posted 2008-04-05 04:29 AM

Karilea...you summed this up beautifully, well done John

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

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Gaia

8 posted 2008-04-05 08:38 AM

enjoyed 'tripping' with you today.

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

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Eternity

9 posted 2008-04-05 10:25 AM

Dear Karilea, I love this dance of whispers in your heart and mind.

Very very lovely.

Love,
Margherita

Marchmadness
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since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

10 posted 2008-04-05 11:02 AM

Nice way to start my day, Karilea. Much enjoyed.
Ida

hoot_owl_rn
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since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

11 posted 2008-04-05 04:06 PM

beautiful

Larrysmom
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since 2008-04-03

Posts 533
Florida, USA

12 posted 2008-04-05 04:45 PM

Wow Karilea, this is awesome… It makes me smile.

Tammy<333

Martie

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California

13 posted 2008-04-05 05:02 PM

Sissie........I think sometimes words do have a life of their own....jumping first, for the joy of it, then wollowing in the deepest deep of sadness. Loved this!

Alison

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since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

14 posted 2008-04-06 04:09 AM

This is so wonderful. I love the falling apart words - I can see them. Great poem. Wonderful poem.

Alison

Mountain Goat
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since 2008-04-06

Posts 32
High Places

15 posted 2008-04-06 05:26 PM

Can just feel the words jumping about

Enjoyed!

Oklahoma Rose
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since 2008-02-28

Posts 1586
Oklahoma USA

16 posted 2008-04-07 10:59 PM

Beautifully written, Karilea!

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