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cassandra's stammer in silk
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cassandra's stammer in silk |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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doka of indigo wells in seija now give pause observe the lotus flower how she is only a flower that lingers on her edges unworthy yet to be a garden that sooths the master's hone too fragile to press her petals to his hollow whetted whisper and will she give faith to wind that prim a seppuku's sever from the eyes of a fearful sky to gift her fragile feather's flight into silk noosed surrender wearing the anklets and bracelets that soothe her bosomed bondage into the prison of his freedom ___________ daark |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Mr Daark.. a lovely gifting here..beautiful love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms r&b, thanks babe |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Dark...a sigh from my garden to yours....your words are rich. |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
D So, did all the females long to be a lotus in your garden after reading this? It's like the Jeopardy question of the day. "cassandra's stammer in silk" (Ding! Ding! Ding!) "What is the poem women in PiP want to live in" ---- Okay, I love this with lots of love - not just a little glance, but a deep, saving, reading again love. xoxox A |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms martie, thank you neighbor, you make me smile ______________ ms ali-san, my garden has no fences, visit anytime and bring a smile in your lady bucket? thanks babe |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...James |
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Seoulair Senior Member
since 2008-03-27
Posts 807Seoul S.Korea |
wonderful. Love the ending verse. very right. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
james, thank you ______________ soeulair, thanks friend for the touch |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
quote: She'd be silly not to.  |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: Sigh! Your writing performance is simply superior. Love, Margherita  |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
good read |
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Larrysmom Senior Member
since 2008-04-03
Posts 533Florida, USA |
Dark, you amaze me… Your poetry takes me to such far away places and stirs the femininity in me. Tammy<333 |
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Indigo Senior Member
since 2001-05-17
Posts 602 |
across the threshold of his garden, she unfurls in pleasured furi-damu. Indigo |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms sun, thank you dear lady for the eyes ___________________ ms mar, thanks babe for the touch ________________________ ms vandana, thank you ______________________ ms larry'smom, thanks to you for letting the woman of you feel my words _______________________ ms indi..your freedom is my prison too, thanks babe |
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