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Open Poetry #42
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Tomer
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since 2002-06-28
Posts 1168
Michigan
0 posted 2008-03-23 07:45 PM


I could stare
Without my eyes
While she sat
With her legs laced
Like an unforgiving knot
Staring out the frosty window.

Her black midnight dress,
Heels like polish
To her pale dew skin,
And she sat staring,
Quietly, the way her umbrella
Shed silence from
The rain shrilled event that morning.

Her reflection on the windowsill,
She looked up past noon,
My rain dipped suit, blue opaque eyes,
Exchanged a warm yawn,
As her lips moved away,
To a smile.
© Copyright 2008 Tomer Fried - All Rights Reserved
Seoulair
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since 2008-03-27
Posts 807
Seoul S.Korea
1 posted 2008-03-27 04:57 AM

very poetic. Love the read.
Brian23
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since 2007-11-03
Posts 73
Belfast, Ireland
2 posted 2008-03-27 08:55 AM

Nice poem. It had a good slow pace to it
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