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TinaTrivett
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since 2006-07-15
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0 posted 2008-03-21 09:07 AM




Burrowing in other peoples belongings
(an invader in a foreign land)
Clammoring for delicate china
(the set Aunt Mary served Thanksgiving on)
Tightly grasping feedsack quilt tops
(the ones Grandma never quite finished)
Boxing up the Waterford crystal
(that Cousin Grace collected for years)
Leafing through antique poetry books
(that lulled a thousand children to sleep)


Pieces of them
go away
one box at a time.

© Copyright 2008 Tina Trivett - All Rights Reserved
Margherita
Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
1 posted 2008-03-21 09:12 AM


It almost hurts in its delicate beauty and sensitivity.

Moments that hold profound emotion. You conveyed this very well.

I need to cope with this too, we can't store everything, if we want to breathe ...

Love,
Margherita

effjayel
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since 2007-09-30
Posts 1474
At the Crossroads of Infinity
2 posted 2008-03-21 03:27 PM


Tina, You summed this up so well. It is a heartbreaking task that I have also had to endure. The fact that it has to be done & putting it off only adds to the pain  good job   John
JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
3 posted 2008-03-21 04:01 PM


Fine writing...James
Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California
4 posted 2008-03-21 08:01 PM


I understand this so well. It is so hard to get rid of the past. It can be so comforting.
                                   Ida

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
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Glen Hope, PA USA
5 posted 2008-03-21 08:14 PM


I loved rummaging through this lovely piece
Ruth

TinaTrivett
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6 posted 2008-03-22 03:32 PM


Thanks all.
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