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JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2008-03-16 04:25 AM

Allow Me

My sweet fragrant flower
I could stay with you
for hours, breathing in
the essence, marveling
that a woman so precious
as you would allow me
to stay for awhile,
to memorize your smile,
to look into your face
and take in the wonder
and the grace of you..

JamesLee
15 March
2008

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

1 posted 2008-03-16 04:36 AM

hi James, i like the poems when they are authentic and well crafted...The simplicity of your metaphor (woman, flower) is gorgeous and warming.

yann

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

2 posted 2008-03-16 04:59 PM

Thank you 2islander2 for the wonderful response...how did you come up with your posting name...James

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

3 posted 2008-03-16 06:04 PM

Ahh, James, to "memorize your smile" that's essential in love.

Enjoyed it much.

Love,
Margherita

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

4 posted 2008-03-16 08:43 PM

Enjoyed the write

ARCTIC WIND

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

5 posted 2008-03-16 08:57 PM

You celebrate the most special of moments.

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

6 posted 2008-03-17 06:54 PM

to memorize your smile,
to look into your face
and take in the wonder
and the grace of you..

I love this James... love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

7 posted 2008-03-18 05:18 PM

Thank you Margherita, Artic Wind, This Diamond and Roniece for the wonderful responses...James

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

8 posted 2008-03-20 01:45 PM

oh James
you speak love so well

Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

9 posted 2008-03-20 01:47 PM

These wouds would be so precious to hear. Joyce

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

10 posted 2008-03-20 03:15 PM

Thank you Lady and Joyce for the nice responses...James

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

11 posted 2008-03-20 10:57 PM

ahha James

this is so completely sweet!!

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

12 posted 2008-03-21 05:09 AM

Thank you Sea...much appreciation...James

K-K
Member

since 2008-03-13

Posts 153
Indiana

13 posted 2008-03-21 09:04 AM

OH, you remind me of my husband. So sweet and attentive to detail. These are the finer things in love.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

14 posted 2008-03-22 04:34 PM

Thank you K-K for the wonderful responses...sounds like you have a wonderful husband that appreciates you...James

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