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Snow White, the Seven Dwarves and Effjayel
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Snow White, the Seven Dwarves and Effjayel |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA 
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The seven dwarves worked at the mine, as they had done for years. Snow White would fix a lunch each day and take it to her dears. One day there was a cave-in, though, and Snow White didn't know. When she showed up and saw the wreckage, she screamed out, "Oh, no!" "Is anyone alive?!", she screamed. "Is anybody there?!?" No answer came back from the shaft. Lips trembled with despair. "CAN ANYBODY HEAR ME!?" Snow White's voice was filled with dread. Once again nobody answered..could they all be dead???? Then one faint voice came from the mine. She strained her ears to hear. Again the small voice spoke although the words were not too clear.. Effjayel is a good poet. Effjayel is a good poet She clapped her hands together and then lifted them to pray. "Thank God!", she said, "At least I know that Dopey is ok!" |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
ha ha With that I'm gone frm here. Bobby |
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sewasham Senior Member
since 2006-09-11
Posts 714Oklahoma, USA |
Balladeer has told the tale and there’s no doubt it’s so There is just one little thing he didn’t mention though Dopey may be still alive like Balladeer has said But his body’s all that made it ‘cause his poetry is dead |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Too many good people have died in the mines |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
This is funny and clever. Alison |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Funny...enjoyed reading this...James |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
They also named a British dish after this tragedy...It's called "Toad in The Hole"..... |
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effjayel Senior Member
since 2007-09-30
Posts 1474At the Crossroads of Infinity |
. It would appear that Dear old Dopey Is masquerading as an Okie For he has missed the gist In ‘Deers little twist Let me explain Seawasham The writer of that stunning poetry Was not that stupid little man It was in fact me Even though Dopey had been pinned beneath the roof What he said was simply the truth Now I know this statement fills you up with dread Because it is not just the little feller that suffers from rocks in the head . |
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effjayel Senior Member
since 2007-09-30
Posts 1474At the Crossroads of Infinity |
Toe, you were in there with Dopey? that's just what you deserve, to be Toed in the Hole.... |
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Bonnie j Senior Member
since 2003-06-27
Posts 1588Ohio |
Ha,ha,ha,. Oh!My! Belly laugh. In the seven DORKS was there a..... Oh!My! I'm snickering so bad I can't think. I forgot what I was going to say. BonBon  |
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effjayel Senior Member
since 2007-09-30
Posts 1474At the Crossroads of Infinity |
. I think Sewasham deserves his own post for all the witty replies... . [This message has been edited by effjayel (03-20-2008 05:10 PM).] |
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sewasham Senior Member
since 2006-09-11
Posts 714Oklahoma, USA |
Seems I owe Dopey an apology. I should have known better, he writes much better than Effjayel. |
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