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Gentle Spirit
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0 posted 2008-03-15 12:05 PM






Ode To The Dawn

                          

Did you see the sun rise this morn?
Rising in glory a new day was born.
The night eased away with the coming dawn,
in a magical moment the night was gone.

As the orange orb greeted the sky
I beheld the wonderment with my eyes.
A soft blanket of light covered the earth.
I had witnessed the dawn at its birth.

Then Mother Nature on timely cue
painted the skies in vibrantly brilliant hues.
Colors melded together on canvas of light
a breathtaking view was held in sight.

Did you take a moment to stop and see
the grande awakening of life to be?



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Earth Angel
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1 posted 2008-03-15 12:13 PM


Good morning, Dawn-a!

It would appear that an angel in flight was bidding adieu to the night! An awesome awakening sky! ~ and your words were gorgeously descriptive!

Love & Dawning Light,

Linda

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2 posted 2008-03-15 12:29 PM


Donna,

It's so odd.  I just came in from taking an early morning shot of the sunrise and am going to do something with it.  I thought I'd peek over here in Open Poetry and here you are!  Great minds and all, right?

I love the beauty of your words.  You, my poet friend, are a delight and an inspiration.

Love,
Alison

2islander2
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3 posted 2008-03-15 03:29 PM


I enjoyed ...wonderful writing...But There is a thing which annoys me, i learn at school in france the word Morning and many poets use the word Morn, is it the new word in USA for saying Morning ? i consider Morning is a beautiful word, why to change it ?

  regards  yann

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