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Joe Crow Member
since 2007-12-18
Posts 66Indiana |
Not to be bragging but I have the finest Woman that's ever been born, I wrote this for her... Dreaming of You I dreamed that I held you last night and I dreamed that I held you so tight that the Love that would follow would swallow my sorrow I dreamed that I held you last night And I dreamed that your Love is divine a Love that is sweeter than wine I gave all of my money for a taste of your honey I dreamed that your love is divine Now I'm just a poor man you see I don't know what she sees in me but when I lay beside her I can feel the Love that's inside her and I know with her is where I should be So I ask you just let me sleep dream the dream of forever so sweet with you right beside me to hold me, to guide me with True Love the one promise we'll keep... Joe Crow "May the things I know be limited only by my imagination" |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
I think some of the best poets hale from Indiana! wonderful verse! Welcome to Passions. |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
That was one sweet dream Joe, I hope it never fades, good luck my friend. Lindsay |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Joe, Don't capitalize "Love". It draws too much attention to itself, and away from the meaning of the poem. Bobby |
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effjayel Senior Member
since 2007-09-30
Posts 1474At the Crossroads of Infinity |
Good job Joe, I bet she loved this.. John |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Hi, Joe! I was so pleased to see that you posted a poem in Open! ~ and a lover-ly poem, it be! It sounds as though your good woman is deserving of the good man that she has!   Linda |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Welcome to Passions. This is lovely writing! |
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Joe Crow Member
since 2007-12-18
Posts 66Indiana |
Thanks everybody, you guys all rock! John, I want to thank you again and say I can see we will be friends! Linda, I left a poem for you in your The Great Spirit Cried thread called Mesa Verde, I hope you like it. Good day! Joe |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
A nice flow of dreams...James |
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effjayel Senior Member
since 2007-09-30
Posts 1474At the Crossroads of Infinity |
Joe, as Linda said, nice to see you posting in open but I hope you continue to post in your former 'Spiritual' home. By the way, I have visited your Come sit by the Drum site & it is fascinating. I do not think many of the visitors to open go into spiritual journeys, so may I please request that you repost Grandfather & the young boy in here ? I am sure it would be greatly enjoyed in this forum Cheers John [This message has been edited by effjayel (03-16-2008 10:30 AM).] |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Oh, yes, Joe! I did indeed, read your poem "Mesa Verde" that you included in your reply to my poem "The Great Spirit Cried" ~ and I had left a response (which is on the second page of my post). It was fantastic!!! Linda |
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