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Juju
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In your dreams

0 posted 2008-03-06 12:46 PM



Reasons

Every moment with you
My heart starts to grow heavy
Are you like the other men?

I'm not use to protection
From someone who is my friend

I wonder how I'll need you
Once your no longer in love

-Juju

-"So you found a girl
Who thinks really deep thougts
What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silent all these Years, Tori Amos

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jwesley
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1 posted 2008-03-06 01:20 PM


Wonderful write my friend...all inclusive yet open.

jimmy

effjayel
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since 2007-09-30
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At the Crossroads of Infinity
2 posted 2008-03-06 01:37 PM


It would be nice, but very hard I think to keep the friendship post love...
LadyTom
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since 2008-02-29
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3 posted 2008-03-06 01:40 PM


Beautiful little poem of sentimental feelings.
He can be a crying shoulder.
enjoyed.

Juju
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In your dreams
4 posted 2008-03-07 12:38 PM


Thank you for all of your comments
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