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poddarku
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0 posted 2008-02-29 10:19 AM



Tears of an angel
------..--------
Winding up his wings
He sits on the steep end of the temple
The angel.

Down there people,
People touching
The marvels of ancient carvings,
People praying and wanting this and that
Everybody has his own hunger.

The eyes of the angel cloud.
Hear, the salt of the water,
Genesis of an ocean is always
By an angel’s tear.
__________

clever talks delay friendship!

© Copyright 2008 poddar kushal - All Rights Reserved
effjayel
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At the Crossroads of Infinity
1 posted 2008-02-29 10:25 AM


Poddarku, We all have need to ask the Angels to grant our wishes,  mine have been answered so many times in the past week.  But then again, I did have a contact on the inside in the shape of Angelo terreste...

BTW, Nice picture, now all we need you to do is tell us what we can shorten your name to... I am tempted to use Pod but am concerned it may be an insult......

amusemi
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since 2001-12-08
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A State of Disarray
2 posted 2008-02-29 11:10 AM


I liked this one alot!  
Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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Eternity
3 posted 2008-02-29 11:29 AM


The eyes of the angel cloud.
Hear, the salt of the water,
Genesis of an ocean is always
By an angel’s tear.


Again you succeed in conveying great emotion, dear Poddar, with this touching poem.

An Angel in disguise maybe to whom nobody
pays any attention? Thus the reason for the tears?

So often sadly we see only our own needs and not those of the others. We need to awaken to Love.

An ocean of tears ... the Angels see and hear the heart whispers, I believe. They do want us to ask their divine assistance... before it is too late.

Love.
Margherita

effjayel
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At the Crossroads of Infinity
4 posted 2008-02-29 11:51 AM


I have just had an email from our friend Poddarku in response to my request for a shorter version of his name.. We can call him Ku,


TomMark
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5 posted 2008-02-29 12:34 PM


soft heart. beautiful!!! my dear friend
JamesMichael
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6 posted 2008-03-01 04:05 PM


Nice...James
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