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Earth Angel
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0 posted 2008-02-23 12:54 PM




A Poet's Hand
by Linda L. Dowd

In darkest hours, whilst all be still,
A poet's hand, dost reach for quill.
~ Pondering thoughts, on which to write,
Upon the parchment by lantern lite.

Words doth flow from quiet mind,
~ Each mot a treasured, poet’s find.
The quill becomes an artist’s brush,
As scenes are painted in vivid blush.

Messages flow from ancient sages,
~ Imparting wisdom thru' out the ages.
A poet's hand oft' times be guided,
By mind and heart ~ with soul abided.

Perhaps ‘tis pain that does inspire,
~ Or passion that dost stir the fire.
The source mightst be a sign Divine,
As to how all Life dost intertwine.

In darkest hours, whilst all be still,
A poet's hand, dost reach for quill
~ Pondering thoughts, on which to write
Upon the parchment by lantern lite.

~



© Copyright 2008 Linda L. Dowd - All Rights Reserved
secondhanddreampoet
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1 posted 2008-02-23 01:20 PM


A grand-fine response to that (now rather 'ancient') 'poetic challenge!' ...

I LOVE all of it, but particularly the beginning (and ending)...plus:


"Words doth flow from quiet mind,
~ Each mot a treasured, poet’s find.
The quill becomes an artist’s brush,
As scenes are painted in vivid blush."

[and, the two Roberts (Burns and Frost) are  
  most assuredly, near the top of my 'poetic    
  heroes' queue!]

v. serious and long-sustained applause
[another of those 'poetic standing ovations']
  for this 'penning!'

TomMark
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2 posted 2008-02-23 01:31 PM


absolutely beautiful !!!
simon
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3 posted 2008-02-23 01:43 PM


Loved it too (as usual...)
Ericc
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4 posted 2008-02-23 04:13 PM


Awesome!

Eric

SmartChick
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5 posted 2008-02-23 04:34 PM


Wow! This is just beautiful. You do have a way with words.
Marchmadness
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6 posted 2008-02-23 04:39 PM


Love this, Linda. I think it is my favorite of your poems.
                                    Ida

Rick
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7 posted 2008-02-23 04:50 PM


Just Beautiful and so much enjoyed my friend, thank you for sharing.

Rick

Robert E. Jordan
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8 posted 2008-02-23 05:38 PM


Earth Angel,

I don’t know what the challenge was.  If it was to throw in antiquated words, or write in the style of Robert Burns, then this would work nicely.

Bobby

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9 posted 2008-02-23 05:50 PM


In darkest hours, whilst all be still,
A poet's hand, dost reach for quill


Wonderful, dearest Angelo Terrestre! In the still of the night, inspiration encounters less obstacles in its flow from ... the Divine Source, I agree!

Perfectly met challenge!

love and hugs, angelic Poetess!
baci e abbracci
Margherita

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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10 posted 2008-02-23 06:24 PM


Lindalou... I love it!!     love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Earth Angel
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11 posted 2008-02-24 02:36 PM


Well, that is certainly the sort of reply that makes me sit up and take notice! Thank you, Sir Bruce!

A curious aside for you ~ 2 of my 5th great grandfathers were dear friends of Robby Burns and they were pallbearers at his funeral. The daughter of one married the son of the other and their great grandson was my great , great grandfather and when he died, the young poet Robert Service attended his funeral while he was visiting in Scotland.

This is a terrific challenge and I am enjoying reading the offerings of other poets.

To paraphrase what an old family friend once said, "The best laid plans of mice and men, are often gone astray." winky wink

Love & Poet Light,

Linda

Earth Angel
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12 posted 2008-02-24 02:44 PM


TomMark ~

Hello, Tom! They say "beauty is in the eye of the beholder" ~ and I am pleased that you have a beautiful eye! lol

Thank you!

Love & Poet Light,
Linda

Earth Angel
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13 posted 2008-02-24 02:46 PM


simon ~

...and "as per usual", I love it when you stop by!

Have a great day!

Love & Poet Light,

Linda
:hug:

Earth Angel
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14 posted 2008-02-24 02:47 PM


Eric ~

An "awesome" from you, dear poet, is "AWESOME"!!!

Merci beaucoups!

Love & Poet's Light,
Linda

Earth Angel
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15 posted 2008-02-24 02:49 PM


SmartChick ~

Thank you, m'friend! ~ And "you have a way with words", as well!

Love & Poet Light,

Linda
:hug:

Earth Angel
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16 posted 2008-02-24 02:51 PM


Marchmadness ~

Thank you for saying so! I am pleased that you have received my poetic offerings so positively!

Love & Poet's Light,

Linda

Earth Angel
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17 posted 2008-02-24 02:52 PM


Rick ~

It always brings a smile to my face ~ and heart ~ when a poem of mine is so well received. Thank you for sharing that with me.

Love & Poet Light,

Linda

Earth Angel
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18 posted 2008-02-24 03:05 PM


Bobby ~

Here is the link to secondhanddreampoet's challege.
/pip/Forum7/HTML/000752.html

Perhaps you would like to join in?!?


Linda

Earth Angel
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19 posted 2008-02-24 03:09 PM


"In the still of the night, inspiration encounters less obstacles in its flow from ... the Divine Source" ~ Yes, I find this to be very true.

love and hugs to you,Maga Margherita!
baci e abbracci
Angelo Terrestre

Earth Angel
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20 posted 2008-02-24 03:10 PM


RDB ~

Lindalou curtsies, smiling.

Love & Poet Light,

Linda

Artic Wind
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21 posted 2008-02-24 03:32 PM


EA-

In darkest hours, whilst all be still,
A poet's hand, dost reach for quill
~ Pondering thoughts, on which to write
Upon the parchment by lantern lite......"

WOW!, This really describes a poet in many ways !-- I love this post so much because it speaks volume that you know what a poet is to the heart.

I love the part I chose because It is such old fashion, and gave us such a good picture of what happened when they would write!

Beautifully Penned with your poetic Ink EA

ARCTIC WIND

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22 posted 2008-02-24 03:39 PM


Hi Linda
My mother's great grandfather was a Burns.
He died in the civil war. They were from Scotland and also claimed some sort of kinship to Robert Burns.
                                Ida

Earth Angel
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23 posted 2008-02-24 03:53 PM


Arctic Wind ~

Thank you for that very thoughtful response! It is much appreciated. You are so kind and I always enjoy your visits. I am also pleased that you appreciated my attempt at recreating what it must have been like for our classic poets in days of old writing by the light of a lantern. I wanted to recreate the atmosphere.

Love & Poet Light,
EA

Earth Angel
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24 posted 2008-02-24 03:59 PM


Ida ~

Fascinating! Thanks for sharing a bit of your 'Burn' history! Unlike you, I cannot claim even a drop of his poetic blood in my veins!

~ but he most assuredly played a part in my family history!   My ancestors erected a statue of Robert Burns in Edinburgh, Scotland. Now home for a host of pigeons, I dare say! lol

Love & Poet Burn's Light,

Linda

LindsayP
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25 posted 2008-02-24 09:58 PM



Just another wonderful poem dear Linda

It's something we have all grown to expect from someone with your spectacular talents.

Loved it

Lindsay

Earth Angel
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26 posted 2008-02-26 12:32 PM


Thank you, LP, I really appreciate you saying that. It means a great deal to me that you think so highly of my writing! ~ and as you should know by now, I think likewise of yours!

Love & Poet Light,

Linda

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