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Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

0 posted 2008-02-21 08:31 PM

I’ve naught held the gentleness of your heart, at a time of solitude when poets sit, sometimes
exhale softly and often shuffle a foot within a worn shoe.

I’ve never heard the sound of a voice that I can only imagine to be so captivating, though the
northern reaches shall assuredly insure her birth place to be of some place high among the
snow covered reaches.

I’ve yet to see more than just a sparkling pair of blue eyes, each wearing a slight though
noticeable hint of whatever it is they call that stuff around their eyes.

And....I’ve missed the moment when a warm hug lingers for an eternity as two bonded
beings feel that which only their minds have caught and brought before them, awaiting
two trembling hands to retrieve and shelter that which so softly holds him there, ever
close....to her. And...slumber beckons him as
a distant figure approaches, gown moving slightly
in the night air until one day a dream comes true.

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

1 posted 2008-02-21 08:44 PM

You Ol softee!
Such a pretty picture you paint.

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

2 posted 2008-02-21 10:23 PM

Lovely Words!

I am SpeechLess!

ARCTIC WIND

Falling rain

Member Elite

since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

3 posted 2008-02-21 10:27 PM

Simply Amazing!!

I love your choice of words. there spellbounding! lol

~Zach~

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

4 posted 2008-02-23 09:12 AM

Dear Barry, this is wonderful. Ah yes, I can relate, the wondering about the voice i.e. ...

May your dreams manifest!!

love
Margherita

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

5 posted 2008-02-23 11:22 AM

"And....I’ve missed the moment when a warm hug lingers for an eternity as two bonded
beings feel that which only their minds have caught and brought before them,"

~ To me, that is the height of intimacy.

"awaiting
two trembling hands to retrieve and shelter that which so softly holds him there, ever
close....to her."

~ But, I have to admit, that anticipation is half the fun!