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Ericc
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0 posted 2008-02-23 04:14 PM



And God too was in the flame that
Spoke in heat against the
Prophets flesh.
And the message carried to his
Own Beloved.
And she too knew of the
Voice of God.


© Copyright 2008 Eric P McCarty - All Rights Reserved
Artic Wind
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1 posted 2008-02-23 04:19 PM


interesting WRITE!

ARCTIC WIND

ThisDiamond
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2 posted 2008-02-23 04:23 PM


WOW!!
Margherita
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3 posted 2008-02-23 06:02 PM


It gives me shivers, dear Eric! It is so powerful that I had to stop for a moment to let the emotion fade a little bit!
Your words reach far ...

Thank you for this precious gift!

I so enjoy your presence here. You have been missed!

I love you.
Margherita

Earth Angel
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4 posted 2008-02-23 07:51 PM


Eric, that was such a compelling write, that I had to read over and over again. You ~ and your poetry ~ have been missed.

Giving you a warm, welcome-back hug,

Linda

Margherita
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5 posted 2008-02-24 06:42 AM


Had to come back, drawn in by the power of your words.

She knew and she knows ...

hugs
Margherita

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6 posted 2008-02-24 08:47 AM


Wow Eric, this is exactly what I needed to read this Sunday morning.  Lovely work.  Welcome back to the pages of blue.
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