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Valentine’s Day
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Valentine’s Day |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan 
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. A cheap bunch Of dried flowers Wrapped in colored paper Picked up late At the station on the run Beside you I laid them When I finally got home From work They weren’t much I know Just a few small flowers Yet you kept them For a year . [This message has been edited by Huan Yi (02-14-2008 08:25 PM).] |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Huan Yi, That's the way it's supposed to work. This is beautifully said. Bobby |
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TomMark Member Elite
since 2007-07-27
Posts 2133LA,CA |
a thought on a wrapping paper should be kept in a treasure box. But I saw no flowers today. I saw stars.  A happy Valentine day to you, dear John. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
She probably kept the dust that the flowers became too... |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Because they meant something to her and I assume you meant something to her as well. Ida |
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