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Goldenrose
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since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665


0 posted 2008-02-14 12:50 PM



I know what you
said, i read your
text and your emails.
Can we still be
friends? This life is
nothing without you in
it, i feel so
alone, naked without you.
Love is what i
wanted to give you
everyday, is that so
very wrong? Am i
so bad for wanting
that? One word a
week would be enough?
Just dont go completely.
I wanted to call you
my wife so proudly?
Just let me be
a friend?To show
you kindness, that is
all i want? Please
let us be friends?

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effjayel
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since 2007-09-30
Posts 1474
At the Crossroads of Infinity
1 posted 2008-02-14 01:23 PM


A moving, heartfelt write......hope it works out for you

"Ignorance is the Enemy...."

TomMark
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since 2007-07-27
Posts 2133
LA,CA
2 posted 2008-02-14 01:32 PM


the cruelty of life and true feelings of human.
beautiful poem, always.  

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light
3 posted 2008-02-14 05:46 PM


To be able to still be friends is a gift each would be giving to the other.

I could feel your heartfelt plea in my own heart.

Giving you a warm, compassionate hug,

Linda



Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia
4 posted 2008-02-14 10:19 PM


Phil.. I feel your heartwords here.. I would gladly be your friend... I hope it works out for you... love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

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