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xrobxscottx
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since 2008-01-15
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0 posted 2008-02-14 01:36 PM


From first glance I knew
I knew that she would get me high
And there was more too
But we parted and time flew by

Quickly I fell into a silent depression
Somewhat of a deep, a dark, a clouded
Regression

Time emptied out my heart
And therein I grew cold
It was then that I had to start
Or else I would be sold

All at once my heart skipped a beat
Brava, again I had found her at last
I couldn't decided how to greet
The most beautiful girl from my past

Killing my eyes
The beauty blinded me
Every word, every prize
It all multiplied by three, for thee

My heart sang
My essence yearned
My phone rang
My ears learned

Every second was so blithesome
Passing moments took me by surprise
My heart was beating like a drum
And I fell into her eyes

Love lifted me up
Grabbed my attention
And tossed me so abrupt
Into affection

Jessica is her name
And taking my heart is her game


"Love is attained not merely through the sight, touch, or any of the senses; but through time."

-Robert Wilson

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effjayel
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since 2007-09-30
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At the Crossroads of Infinity
1 posted 2008-02-14 02:36 PM


I like this a lot, it flows so well. I especially like the lines  
quote:
My heart sang
My essence yearned
My phone rang
My ears learned


Good job..


"Ignorance is the Enemy...."

xrobxscottx
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2 posted 2008-02-14 07:16 PM


Thanks! It was a poem that I wrote for my gf, for Valentines day.

n.n;

"Love is attained not merely through the sight, touch, or any of the senses; but through time."

-Robert Wilson

JamesMichael
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3 posted 2008-02-16 02:58 PM


Nice...James
Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
4 posted 2008-02-16 03:15 PM




ROB & JESSICA



Forevermore





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