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Open Poetry #42

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Tomer
Senior Member

since 2002-06-28

Posts 1168
Michigan

0 posted 2008-02-14 09:24 PM

I stepped aside,
I stepped in as a podium
Through a thought of
What it’s like to be someone else,

A figure without a disfigured thought,
With a lip so soft,
A shadow that could sleep with glee,
With a rope around my shoveled head

And it never loses its shape,
Cant say a sun could
Round upon my covet spread eyes

And I lie to the way I lye down,
I lye with my feet
Gazing to a space
That sits empty,
That keens away from a fruited light

A thought that rips itself
Around a thought I can’t get to,
A naval that sleeps without
Hands above to.

TomMark
Member Elite

since 2007-07-27

Posts 2133
LA,CA

1 posted 2008-02-16 02:11 PM

I read many times of this one. And I have always enjoyed the experience of searching for the meaning. Most of the time, I may not get it but an art is an art.
Tom

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