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Dare ... (senryu)
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Dare ... (senryu) |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity 
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 * Dare manifest love it's a bud ready to bloom upon her sun smile * |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
gorgeous!  |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
note:I wrote this for my son, who doesn't dare to declare his love ... (that's why I put in "her", it should not be contained in a classical senryu, but I choose to be flexible ... and it can be read also "his" ...) Margherita  |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Thank you dear Dixie!  |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Lovely...James |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Daring is baring all.....risky, sometimes worth the effort..... Thanks for your replies to my insanity....In the famous words of Barney Fife from Andy of Mayberry...."He ain't right"...and yea, I'm not "right" for sure....I usually only visit for a month at a time...then wander off for a year or so....usually write insanity...some times on adult when I feel really naughty...but, again..thanks for your kind words to my zany 'schtuff'... |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Thank you dear James. Thank you dear Toerag, that's nice that you came in here. Yes it could be risky ... but if he does not give it a try, he will never know! You should not take so much time off and disappear! To judge from the way you are cherished here, I would say that you are totally "right". A little naughtiness won't harm anybody! |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Well, I don't get "naughty" very often...but, if you want to see my infamous only seriously romantic/naughty try..go to adult and hunt up "The Pond That Has No Ripples"..... |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear Toerag, I have never registered to "adults" in all these years ... I fear I don't have the age .... anymore!!!     |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms mar, lovely color in your mind here,enjoyed |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Dare manifest love it's a bud ready to bloom upon her sun smile I love each line...  M |
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poddarku Senior Member
since 2008-01-15
Posts 589india |
it is ...well,piquant. |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
glorious!!! |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Beautiful warming glow Hope |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
You show such kindness and such love. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Thank you all. May you be wrapped in love always! Margherita |
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