»
Archives
»
Open Poetry #42
»
Day's End
| Open Poetry #42 |
|
Day's End |
|
Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! 
|
 [This message has been edited by Alison (02-14-2008 01:21 AM).] |
||
| © Copyright 2008 Alison - All Rights Reserved | |||
|
passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
gorgeous! |
||
|
Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Thank you, Dixie girl. I almost didn't stop to get the picture, but - I did. A |
||
|
JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Perfect...James |
||
|
effjayel Senior Member
since 2007-09-30
Posts 1474At the Crossroads of Infinity |
A I cannot find the words to express my admiration for both the picture & the words, to produce either one OR the other is amazing, but both of them...... Stunning, Cheers John |
||
|
Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms ali-san..I enjoy looking through the window here. |
||
|
miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Alison, Beautiful haiku and accompanying picture! I think this is my favorite haiku yet. Way to go! miscellanea |
||
|
Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
You did a wonderful job here, dear Alison! love Margherita  |
||
|
vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
||
|
simon Member
since 2008-01-14
Posts 440London, England |
Really nice Haiku... |
||
|
ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Wonderful works Alison. This is splendid! |
||
|
Bobby Jordan Member
since 2007-08-13
Posts 491Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Alison, This is a good Haiku in the classic manner. It's also a very pretty picture. Eat more lumpy oatmeal. Bobby |
||
|
Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Alison, that photo is breath-taking! ~ and your words complement it beautifully! Smiling here. Love 'n Sunsets, Linda  |
||
|
Kristabell Senior Member
since 2003-11-29
Posts 678Portland, OR |
Simple and sweet. Love this. K |
||
|
secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
Fine imaging (poetically and photographically!) I am not particularly fond, however, of very large-sized images... I believe that might perhaps detract somewhat from the 'power' of the 'word-painted' imagery?! applause for this 'penning!' |
||
|
TomMark Member Elite
since 2007-07-27
Posts 2133LA,CA |
simply beautiful! |
||
|
Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
wonderful, wonderful, wonderful! Have I told you lately how wonderful you are my sweet Ali? love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
||
|
Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
James I thank you so much for reading and responding like you do. A __________ John, The picture was just sheer luck - it was a beautiful evening and the words were inspired by the picture. So, see, I was kind of out of the loop. Thank you lots. Alison __________ D Thank you. There was a scarey story my sisters used to tell me when I was little (well, I thought it was a scarey ghost story - grins). They would end it by saying, "I am the Window Washer. I am the Window Washer." You, my friend, are the "Window Watcher" Think there is a poem in those words some where .. may try my hand at it. A __________ miscellanea What lovely words from a lovely lady. Thank you. Ali __________ Margherita So many times you make my nights with your thoughtful and kind responses. Thank you, my friend. Love, Ali __________ vandana Your smiles make me smile. Thank you. Alison __________ Simon, Thank you for your comment. It means a lot to me. Alison __________ ThisDiamond, Thank you for popping in and leaving a note. It's a wonderful thing. Ali __________ Bobby, Thank you - and no, I don't do lumpy oatmeal. Even for you. Thanks again, Alison __________ Linda, Making you smile is a gift. I love making you smile as you do the same for me so often. Love, Alison __________ Bruce, Thank you so much for the comments ... you are a joy. And I agree with you. The picture was way too big. I had made it smaller but could not change it til tonight. I am working out of Photo Shop now and need to figure out my sizes for the haiku pictures. Thank you again. Your friend, Ali __________ TomMark, You are such a part of my PiP experience. I love your writing and are thrilled when you respond to my poems. Thank you, friend. Alison __________ RDB You know that I love you, darlin'. Thank you for being such a wonderful friend. Ali |
||
|
Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Love it! Ida |
||
|
Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Ida Thank you. Alison |
||
|
Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Hi Jaime, I almost forgot. This haiku says Sharing its last smile Sunlight slips behind the hill until tomorrow. The picture is a golden, rust sunset with dark shadows of large spruce trees around the edge of the picture. The sky is black with a small bit of the sunset. Alison |
||
|
Misty Lilacs Senior Member
since 2005-11-15
Posts 1060White Birch Forest |
Totally spectacular. |
||
|
jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Now that's almost perfection! The missing element is me being there.... j. |
||
|
LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
Beautiful words beautiful picture. Loved it, Lindsay |
||
|
Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Misty Lilacs Thank you. My girlfriend here saw it and started laughing. Alison, she said, you have a typo AGAIN! Those who know me look for my typo's. It's my cross to bear, I think and now I have to redo this darn thing. Thank you again, xoxoxo Alison ___________ You just gotta come on by sometime and visit, my friend. A ___________ Lindsay, Thank you so much. You make me smile. Alison |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||
