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A princess in waiting...
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A princess in waiting... |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia 
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it’s your words that undo me in the evenings when my eyes are sleepy and begging me to close they turn up by surprise one two three daring me to read short and to the point expressive sometimes proper sometimes not yet knowing I will savor them at length and sleep the sleep of a princess in waiting so a new day can begin... Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... [This message has been edited by Roniece Dawson-Bruce (02-02-2008 05:43 AM).] |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
A lovely princess indeed May her days of waiting be colored with the beauty that shines from inside Lovely write, dear friend. A |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
This is nice...James |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Zacubus... I think, understanding and respect go a long way on these pages blue.. Ali and James... thank you, your comments on my work always warm my heart.. Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
Roneice, this is a lovely piece very touching makes me want to write one of my own princess poems |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Thank you Dixie... you must, you must, I insist!! I'm waiting for your princess poem as we speak my dear sweet friend! thank for your wonderful comment... love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms r & b..I suspect the dream times of a lady is when the woman dances..enjoyed this window ms |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
smiles.. Mr Daark.. I think you know a little more about me with every poem I write.. thank you for being you! love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear Roniece lovely Princess, your moments before sleep are sweet and certainly bring equally sweet dreams. I wonder if there are still Princes who can live up to a girl's dreams ... but what fun to create him! They say our thoughts are bound to realize and this is good news! love and hugs Margherita  |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Princess indeed, Loved this, nicely done. |
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simon Member
since 2008-01-14
Posts 440London, England |
One word. Sweet. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Pretty write Roniece, one most of us can relate to. I especially liked the feel of the words you impart here. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
I love reading the glimpses into your soul dear Roniece and I must say I can truly relate to the words you have written here. The poems here at Passions do pull us back, again and again. Thank you for being here. Hugs, luv ya lady!! |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Very touching RDB! ARCTIC WIND |
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TomMark Member Elite
since 2007-07-27
Posts 2133LA,CA |
Beautiful poem. Always soft hearted. beautiful!!!! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
May your waiting days be over, Princess Poetess!  Such a sweet, whimsical piece of writing. Smiling here. May all your dreams be sweet! Love Linda |
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Robert Frazier Senior Member
since 2003-02-06
Posts 1014 |
never wait to undo me with your poetry, sweet Roniece! Hugs, Robert |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
thank you everyone... your lovely comments do so make me smile... I appreciate you all... love RDB PS: Simon.. that was actually 3 words you used not one! Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Bobby Jordan Member
since 2007-08-13
Posts 491Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
RDB, This is one of the few good "shape" poems I've read. The shape is appropriate to the words. Good work Princess. Bobby |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
thank you Bobby... your comments on my work always make me smile you are a very nice person and I do so enjoy your Felix poems... love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
a very lovely poem Roniece, my friend |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
hello my sweet friend, I haven't heard from you in ages! I do hope you are well... thank you for your lovely comments.. love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
Sweet dreams Roniece, much enjoyed. A big warm hug to you dear lady. Lindsay |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
thank you Lindsay! you always bring a smile to my eyes.. love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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poddarku Senior Member
since 2008-01-15
Posts 589india |
it brought many a dreams and smiles in my face. |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Dear Roniece, I loved this my friend, thank you for sharing. Rick |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Po.. thank you for your lovely comments on my work... RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
hello Rick.. gorgeous pic of you! oops I've said that already! LOL thank you for your comments on my work, I appreciate you ... love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Dear Roniece, I appreciated you also my friend, have a wonderful day. Rick |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Loved it!! j. |
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Angel4aKing Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372USA |
Every now and then we all seem to feel like a princess in waiting....Good one!!! Though makes me feel like beating my head against a wall!!! LOL :frustrated: ~~~kingsangel~~~ |
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Robert Frazier Senior Member
since 2003-02-06
Posts 1014 |
your words undo me! how beautiful...romantic! Hugs, Robert |
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